http://www8.zippyshare.com/v/79102247/file.html
and theres my try, i know i have to layer a sub on and maybe a low/mid sound to it, what to you think of it otherelse?
http://www10.zippyshare.com/v/45893199/file.html
maybe better
http://www65.zippyshare.com/v/65262164/file.html
even better i think