so guys i started producing about three months ago and i just finished this track and i really want some constructive feedback. something so that i can get bette from. i know the mixing and mastering is really bad mostly cause i know absolutely nothing about that. but any comments would be really appreciated. thank you and have a great day.

http://soundcloud.com/kg2600100

Lose all the stuff before 3:56...

Okay, perhaps that's a bit strong, but before then, whilst each 'idea' isn't bad, they're too disjoint. Your breaks sound as if the track is ending each time, and there's not consistent beat to carry it through.

The last 2 minutes actually sound much more cohesive, with everything interplaying, only really lacking a bit more variety.

I think you've got some good ideas, and some good sound - they just need to be glued together a bit more. Of course, if you're not looking to sound 'commercial' then by all means keep them as distinct sections

Mixing wise, you tend to have one dominant 'part' in each section, whilst the rest get lost in the 'mush' so you just need to balance that a bit more.

All IMHO.

im no expert but sounds pretty good on my pc speakers. It almost seems like 2 seperate tracks with the break at 3.55 but thats a personal choice.
after 3 months only, this is pretty impressive.
I personally would like more weirdness in the track

thanks guys really appreciate the feedback