I think it is so much better now. All I did really was add a pad to it and extend the build up at the end but it was a ton of work!

If anyone hears anything off please let me know, also if you like it please let me know too!


link: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=554 785&songID=11734038
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went back and reworked this some. I hope it is better now!

Yes, yes, speechless! It must be awesome

I like it.

The only criticism I might have is that it might need a little more bottom end. The kick is a bit thin.

Other than that, I love the energy in this piece, and it's very pleasing to my ears.

Thanks for the constructive advice! I am glad your ears like it

I agree compared to some of my other songs the kick sounds thinner. I think I could add some bottom end just to the kick to fix this.

A nice light touch on here, with pleasant melodic contributions. That snare might benefit from just a little more LF as well. Not too much, or the track will lose the light vibe that it currently has.


Good work

Thank you also for the good comments. I just went back and put a little more bass on all the drums with the master drum buss. Actually a touch of high end too, but not much.

If anyone has any more constructive criticism I am all ears. I stayed up all night doing this so my ears are sort of shot. It helps to get feedback like that!

just put up a free high rez download for anyone who likes the song.

I think that's better. Those drums have a "fuller" sound without upsetting the mood of the track

agreed! Thanks so mcuh, it did really need that!

Yes, it sounds much better now. As seismic1 said, fuller.

Thanks to you and seismic1

Nicely arranged and a really pleasant listen - the different synth lines work very well together. Lovely work!

I agree, well done. Deceptively simple synth lines, this stuff is harder to do than imagined.
And you do it very well.

Thanks you all, very kind words.