Hi guys so this is as close as im gonna get to finishing off a track, have a listen and let me know what u think i kinda feel like im def missing stuff and maybe the structure aint the best but ive taken my time doing this track and i think ive lost the patience for now.

Anyways comments are appreciated good bad and the ugly thanks in advance ^_^

http://soundcloud.com/taza736/reow

edit put in the wrong song ..lol

Nice track. I'm not sure what advice I could give as I was listening to it with a bit of nostalgia, therefore a lack of any objectivity. I used to listen (and dance) to a lot of stuff like this when I was living in Seoul and it really hit a good spot with me tonight. I guess I'm still a sucker for compressed kicks and rubbery bass arpeggios. Well done.

thanks ! =) i heard a remix by fehrplay for one of eric prydz songs it had a lot of 80's type synths loved it, so i thought i would give it a shot. Its not completley 80's but the closest i could get it too.

Again appreciate the comment !

I usually don't listen to this kind of EDM, but your production is really good! Track is clean and has good production. And I like the melodies too, reminds me Madeon.

Top notch track. Nothing to add!

cheers bud appreciate you listening to the track, i think im a fair way below madeon but dw il be more than happy to take the compliment =P.

Really like the chilled vibe in this! not the usual electro i listen to but, i do like it alot!

Mixing sounds good as well

It's really good in style, its definitely worth finishing (I know the feelign though) but the mix:

1. It's dark. It's prob got too much bus compression maybe, that could be why it's a bit dark.

2. Your clap is really nice, but too quiet.

3. (Possibly) Kick is too big, I don't mean too loud, I mean taking up too much room here, pulling everything else down, you need to tighten it, shorten it make it a little more clicky maybe? It's def too fat overall and it's burrying your bass and other drum sounds.

4. The snare the works the buildup needs to be a bit louder imo, to be bolder.

Something is keeping this mix boxed in and dark, and dull. It's not able to breath.

It's a very good mix besides all that though. Very glued.