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mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Thu Apr 11, 2013 12:42 am

Repo...then unrepo...who knows.
all I can

macmurphy · Post by **macmurphy** » Thu Apr 11, 2013 3:25 pm

very interesting tune, i like it. i find its simplicity really quite charming and that piano line is now stuck in a loop in my head. excellent

neil.

macmurphy · Post by **macmurphy** » Thu Apr 11, 2013 3:26 pm

Emerald Tablet · Post by **Emerald Tablet** » Thu Apr 11, 2013 4:00 pm

It sucks
I mean ... The compression

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Fri Apr 12, 2013 12:24 am

I'm never sure bout these things.

Thought maybe it wasn't done.

Here's what I had...or have so far.

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Fri Apr 12, 2013 12:32 am

macmurphy wrote:very interesting tune, i like it. i find its simplicity really quite charming and that piano line is now stuck in a loop in my head. excellent

neil.

Thanks for the listen Neil.

I can't figure out where to take it from here.

seismic1 · Post by **seismic1** » Fri Apr 12, 2013 4:54 pm

Maybe it doesn't need to go anywhere. Leave it alone for a while and take another listen in a couple of months. If you think it needs something else at that time, you'll figure it out reasonably quickly.

I liked it

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Sat Apr 13, 2013 9:47 am

seismic1 wrote:Maybe it doesn't need to go anywhere. Leave it alone for a while and take another listen in a couple of months. If you think it needs something else at that time, you'll figure it out reasonably quickly.

I liked it

agreed, good advice.

cheers mate!

polyslax · Post by **polyslax** » Sat Apr 13, 2013 11:22 am

Love what you've got here, the simple catchy piano, great top and bottom strings, bare percussion and electronics. The only thing I'd change in the arrangement is I wouldn't re-introduce the beat at the end and I would end at the first wrote a song that you can't forget. I don't like to impose my thoughts on arrangement, because it's your art... I respect that and totally dig what you do, just a suggestion on how I would wrap up the track.

drumity · Post by **drumity** » Sat Apr 13, 2013 6:54 pm

Rob !

Simplicity is beautiful
and a touch of genius.

You definitively have your own style
and your voice is unique as well.

That's a real MR.ME

I like it !

I am looking forward to let more of your songs shine
and to refine them

You rock !

(( D ))

Frantz · Post by **Frantz** » Sat Apr 13, 2013 7:27 pm

Feedback removed. I think my original comments were not strong enough. I will work on editing them and perhaps compressing them with a strong font.

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Sun Apr 14, 2013 4:57 pm

polyslax wrote:Love what you've got here, the simple catchy piano, great top and bottom strings, bare percussion and electronics. The only thing I'd change in the arrangement is I wouldn't re-introduce the beat at the end and I would end at the first wrote a song that you can't forget. I don't like to impose my thoughts on arrangement, because it's your art... I respect that and totally dig what you do, just a suggestion on how I would wrap up the track.

Also good advice, that was one of the things that wasn't quite right...ending is always important.

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Sun Apr 14, 2013 4:58 pm

drumity wrote:Rob !

Simplicity is beautiful
and a touch of genius.

You definitively have your own style
and your voice is unique as well.

That's a real MR.ME
I like it !

I am looking forward to let more of your songs shine
and to refine them

You rock !

(( D ))

Sir.

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Sun Apr 14, 2013 5:00 pm

Frantz wrote:Feedback removed. I think my original comments were not strong enough. I will work on editing them and perhaps compressing them with a strong font.

A good kick to the teeth wakes you up in the mornin'.

...or a pat on the back.

Cheers!

ZenPunkHippy · Post by **ZenPunkHippy** » Sun Apr 14, 2013 5:03 pm

Very nice track. The production (well, everything!) is spot on

Peace,
Andy.