Dominic - Whisper Of Forgotten Dreams [Chillout/Mysterious]

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Hi Everybody!

I'm quite excited because this is one of my first tracks and also the first I uploaded and presented a larger crowd. It is still "under construction" because there're some parts I still need to improve. Especially the first lead melody needs some improvement (maybe even replace it with a whole new one). The main reason why I uploaded this track is to get some feedback and advice for improvement.

Track information:
Artist: Dominic
Title: Whisper of forgotten dreams
Genre: Really don't know - some kind of chillout / mysterious / film music
Duration: 4:45
128 kbit/s mp3 format

Link:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/16935376ef4b2766/

Improvement advices are appreciated and thank you for listening!