Psychedelic Electro House-- I don't know, help!

[deltro]

http://files.getdropbox.com/u/59353/ffff.mp3

I'm desperate, I really don't know what to do with this one. The guitar needs to be rerecorded. The drums are a bit repetitive. But I think this is a pretty hot track.

I really really like the vocals, and want to know what to do to clean them up, and make them sound better- with the way I have them effected.

Please help.

[mkastrup]

Well i think overall you could benefit from some EQ'ing it all. Right now it has a feeling of a towel tossed over the speakers. After adjusting some high EQ you will need to lower the hihat quite a bit or else it will make peoples ears bleed

Cheers

/Michael