Bad sleep (Dark House)

[djOrloff]

if happens poor sleep, then it may be born new track

http://dostavka.net.ua/pub/djOrloff_Bad_sleep.mp3

[seismic1]

I like this track. Some of the melodies have a middle-eastern flavour. This gives your track a USP.

I think you need to "toughen up" the sound of the lead instrument a little. there is a vibrato like effect on there that could become tiring.

Overall, this is a very good song.

I hope you get some sleep soon.

[djOrloff]

seismic1, thanks! but i don't know, what is USP?

I hope you get some sleep soon.

will be soon!

[seismic1]

USP - Unique selling proposition (or unique selling point)