I would appreciate it if someone could give me some solid advice on the mix of my new track. It is very calming, sleepy and meditative, so if your in that mood and have the speakers/time, please let me know your thoughts.

http://atmastudios.com/NewMix/vaisnava%20-%20building%20me%2 0slowly.mp3


Any feedback is good feedback. Please be brutally honest.

Cheers!

I wouldn't say sleepy and calming to be honest.....

the clicking sounds are quite shrill (not in a bad way but if I were in a sleepy mood I'd be annoyed)
the kick is really strong and has a lot of oomph and attack as well....

so if you're going for meditative remove some of the subs and some of the harsher highs....

sounds good though, so if it doesn't HAVE to be calming and sleepy simply leave it the way it is.....