Low tempo but really cool
Its coming
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- KVRian
- 1107 posts since 28 Mar, 2002 from Iceland
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- addled muppet weed
- 111274 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
its coming?whats is it?
will it be here by tuesday,im busy from then on
have to be honest i was really enjoying it until the percussion started,dont get me wrong the percussion does work im just not sure about its introduction here
obviously thats a personal thing 
other than that tho pretty cool track,nice production keep em coming
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1107 posts since 28 Mar, 2002 from Iceland
vurt wrote: have to be honest i was really enjoying it until the percussion started,dont get me wrong the percussion does work im just not sure about its introduction here
other than that tho pretty cool track,nice production keep em coming
What is exactly you dont like about the begining
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- KVRAF
- 1981 posts since 26 Oct, 2003 from Toronto
It sounds like great music to me as well, but concur with vurt - the intro needs a little 'something more'? Just as an idea, like sweeping it down from a high pass filter so it's like 'bip-bap-bam-BAM-BOOM'
kinda? Or maybe raise their volume while bringing down a humongous amount of reverb simultaneously so it sounds like the kick is being pushed towards the mic from the back of a huge warehouse? Just 'something'. It sounds a little too 'generic Hip Hop' as it is. And with just a quick neat effect, you can change all that.
But other than that, I like the beat and music ALOT! Keep up the great work!
kinda? Or maybe raise their volume while bringing down a humongous amount of reverb simultaneously so it sounds like the kick is being pushed towards the mic from the back of a huge warehouse? Just 'something'. It sounds a little too 'generic Hip Hop' as it is. And with just a quick neat effect, you can change all that.
But other than that, I like the beat and music ALOT! Keep up the great work!
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1107 posts since 28 Mar, 2002 from Iceland
K point taken, the intro dosent really sound good...but what abput just cutting the tremolo strings out of the begining and start the song with kick,kick,kick,snare,kick,snare...or just start the song straight away
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- KVRAF
- 1981 posts since 26 Oct, 2003 from Toronto
No, no! I LIKE the intro! It set's up a nice chilly atmosphere for me atleast. Just the way that kick drum comes in - I expect to hear Jay Z saying 'Ahhhhhh yeah, give it up now!' or something? But I think if you 'twist' it in, either with a filter or sometype of effect - you retain the 'Trip Hop' feel, but keep Jay Z from ever coming near it.
It set's up a nice chilly atmosphere for me atleast. Just the way that kick drum comes in - I expect to hear Jay Z saying 'Ahhhhhh yeah, give it up now!' or something? But I think if you 'twist' it in, either with a filter or sometype of effect - you retain the 'Trip Hop' feel, but keep Jay Z from ever coming near it. -
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1107 posts since 28 Mar, 2002 from Iceland
hmmm....what about backwards reverb and delay
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- KVRist
- 59 posts since 19 May, 2003
Theres a lot of space in this... and I mean that as a good thing. I like it a lot.
Listening to it, I hear an Arabic voice over the top that would sit really well, someone like Khaled.
Just an idea.
Nice one elv
Listening to it, I hear an Arabic voice over the top that would sit really well, someone like Khaled.
Just an idea.
Nice one elv
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1107 posts since 28 Mar, 2002 from Iceland
Thanks HoTRocK, trying to be sparse, as I have always added,added,added and added more part 
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1107 posts since 28 Mar, 2002 from Iceland
Is this something similar you are talking about Steve
http://easy.go.is/coti/The%20Coming2.mp3
It is just a couple of seconds, the Icelandic host I use for temp files like this dosent allow big files
http://easy.go.is/coti/The%20Coming2.mp3
It is just a couple of seconds, the Icelandic host I use for temp files like this dosent allow big files
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- KVRAF
- 1981 posts since 26 Oct, 2003 from Toronto
That's not bad either. I quickly tapped out this beat to give you an idea of the effects I was talking about. This uses a HPF down slope AND the reverb reduction bringing the drums forward in the kick intro, and then flattens out for the rythem.
http://home.comcast.net/~rjjr77/Elv_Idea.mp3
I'm no Buddy Rich I know.
But hopefully this displays the idea better to you.
I quickly tapped out this beat to give you an idea of the effects I was talking about. This uses a HPF down slope AND the reverb reduction bringing the drums forward in the kick intro, and then flattens out for the rythem.http://home.comcast.net/~rjjr77/Elv_Idea.mp3
I'm no Buddy Rich I know.
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- addled muppet weed
- 111274 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
yeah im with steve here dont lose the intro completely,its just the start of the drums the initail 4 or 5 beats,to my ears they sounded cold.in otherwords as steve has already said a bit of phasing up as they come in or something just to add life.
but do not lose the intro that in itself had me hooked for the rest of the track
but do not lose the intro that in itself had me hooked for the rest of the track
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1107 posts since 28 Mar, 2002 from Iceland
Somthing like this
http://easy.go.is/coti/The%20Coming201.mp3
http://easy.go.is/coti/The%20Coming201.mp3
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- KVRAF
- 1981 posts since 26 Oct, 2003 from Toronto
There you go!
Sounds like it could work to me. Just gives that impression that 'somethings starting up', than 'rude wake up call'. The 'rudeness' works in Hip Hop alot of times, but your tune is 'evolving and growing' - so try to think of that for the drums as well.
(Am I sounding like a grade 9 art teacher or what? Somebody shoot me!
)
Good luck!
Sounds like it could work to me. Just gives that impression that 'somethings starting up', than 'rude wake up call'. The 'rudeness' works in Hip Hop alot of times, but your tune is 'evolving and growing' - so try to think of that for the drums as well.
(Am I sounding like a grade 9 art teacher or what? Somebody shoot me!
)Good luck!
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1107 posts since 28 Mar, 2002 from Iceland
It is much better this way, thanks for the help Steve