Subject: New Song Featuring My Deep Voice.
Please review my new song. It has electronic backings. Any comments would be great. It's called "Wait for.."
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/mrspa ... mmusic.htm
If you don't have an account you might be able to get it here.
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Download ... ID=2300550
Please Review my Track Featuring my Deep Voice.
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Mr. Sparklebottom Mr. Sparklebottom https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=22483
- KVRist
- 36 posts since 25 Apr, 2004
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- KVRist
- 238 posts since 10 Mar, 2004
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- KVRAF
- 6596 posts since 21 Jun, 2004 from Secret Underground Hideout
Thanks for using Soundclick. I love to stream. Odd tune. Deep voice? I was expecting Type O Negative. The other tunes are uh..odd too.
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- KVRian
- 1313 posts since 29 Mar, 2002 from Salt Lake City, Utah - U.S.A.
Hmmm... You know I think there needs to be some ketchup on the vocals or something. Too naked.
Honestly I cringe a little during certain parts. Seems out of tune and hits some uncomfortable notes. It sounds sorta whiney in a bad sorta way.
Others may like it, doesn't work for me though.
I've had stuff that I've sang and thought was really good, then gone back and listened to it day's later and felt almost embarrased about it, this reminds me of one of those songs.
Your song "My Love" works and sounds good to me though. Just fits more with the song and is mixed right, a nifty little song too (I enjoy the coughing- creative, fitting and works with the whole).
Incidently "Wait For..." sounds a little better the second time for whatever reason, still not really easily digested though.
Honestly I cringe a little during certain parts. Seems out of tune and hits some uncomfortable notes. It sounds sorta whiney in a bad sorta way.
Others may like it, doesn't work for me though.
I've had stuff that I've sang and thought was really good, then gone back and listened to it day's later and felt almost embarrased about it, this reminds me of one of those songs.
Your song "My Love" works and sounds good to me though. Just fits more with the song and is mixed right, a nifty little song too (I enjoy the coughing- creative, fitting and works with the whole).
Incidently "Wait For..." sounds a little better the second time for whatever reason, still not really easily digested though.