KVR Audio

bailees7irish · Post by **bailees7irish** » Tue Mar 06, 2012 7:16 pm

an upbeat track with my own vox + some rock and pop and ambient elements

http://k003.kiwi6.com/hotlink/9168n5yf6 ... ghoest.mp3

~Brendan

bailees7irish · Post by **bailees7irish** » Wed Mar 07, 2012 1:07 pm

bump bump bump

D.H. Miltz · Post by **D.H. Miltz** » Thu Mar 08, 2012 1:38 am

I mostly like this. Maybe harsh in the highs here too (this could just be my hearing and setup). Also, it seems like it could stretch out a bit. All in all, though, nicely done, and if you hadn't specifically asked for critical feedback I'd probably have just said, "I enjoyed it." And so I did. So, thanks.

PaleBlueDot · Post by **PaleBlueDot** » Thu Mar 08, 2012 2:18 am

I really like beat, synths, etc. The only part I would change is the main vocal, but it is probably because I like more digital or dirty sounding stuff. The vocal is to clean for me, at least against that musical background. I found myself wanting to through some sort of distortion effect, or vocoder on the main vocal. Personal desires aside though, I thought it was a nice track.

bailees7irish · Post by **bailees7irish** » Thu Mar 08, 2012 2:41 am

D.H. Miltz wrote:I mostly like this. Maybe harsh in the highs here too (this could just be my hearing and setup). Also, it seems like it could stretch out a bit. All in all, though, nicely done, and if you hadn't specifically asked for critical feedback I'd probably have just said, "I enjoyed it." And so I did. So, thanks.

i will definitely look into those highs... i think i'm gonna need to suck it up and get some monitors even tho i really dont want to spend the money (or more so, my girlfriend doesnt want me to spend the money! haha)

i'm glad that you enjoyed it! thanks for listening D.H.

~Brendan

bailees7irish · Post by **bailees7irish** » Thu Mar 08, 2012 2:42 am

PaleBlueDot wrote:I really like beat, synths, etc. The only part I would change is the main vocal, but it is probably because I like more digital or dirty sounding stuff. The vocal is to clean for me, at least against that musical background. I found myself wanting to through some sort of distortion effect, or vocoder on the main vocal. Personal desires aside though, I thought it was a nice track.

thanks! i may play around with the vocals a bit and see what i can come up with. perhaps even just on the second half of the song, adding some dirt and grit to to vox may take it to that level...

great feedback! much appreciated!

~Brendan

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