Free Me From My Insides - Hipster pop

[nineofkings]

"Hipster pop" is the best way I can think of to describe this. I'm just looking for some feedback on the mix and the whole thing in general. Thanks.

http://soundcloud.com/nine-of-kings/fre ... my-insides

[experimental.crow]

i enjoyed this quite a bit ...
the falsetto is a bit of a stretch ...

[dusted william]

i enjoyed this quite a bit ...
the falsetto is a bit of a stretch ...

The falsetto was my favorite part!

dw

[nineofkings]

Thanks for the feedback so far. This seems to happen a lot, where one person's favorite part is another's least favorite. Art's a funny thing.

[experimental.crow]

Thanks for the feedback so far. This seems to happen a lot, where one person's favorite part is another's least favorite. Art's a funny thing.

the falsetto is growing on me ...
the transition back could be tinkered with , phrasing wise ...
it's really a well conceived pop arrangement ...

hope you expand on it ...

[Mister Natural]

Nine - I like the piece & the concept . . .

opportunities would be creating a "C" section(Beatles or XTC would do one at a new, much slower tempo out of nowhere) and the drums seem a little dis-jointed from the rest of the piece(perhaps less is more?)

strengths would be the both the a & b melodies and the "freedom" idea itself

peace

[nineofkings]

Thank you. I did think that it is pretty short, and a separate section or interlude would be a good way to extend it without having to add "filler." I'm a little reluctant to compare myself to the Beatles, though... Anyway, about the drums, I just want to know how they are disjointed? There isn't very much going on rhythmically. I'm not exactly sure what you mean.

[aidanpete]

didn't really dig the falsetto, enjoyed the melody its quiet good