Dear Mr. DDMF developer dude,
you really REALLY need someone to proofread your ads. The one currently running on KVR reads "Prize doesn't matter. Technique does. That's why my boyfriend loves DDMF."
I think what you might be trying to say is: "Price doesn't matter" (and there are surely more elegant ways to say this). And regarding the second sentence - I'm just guessing here that Dutch and German are similar - in German, "Technik" can mean technique OR technology. You can't make this particular "pune, or play on words" in English, though, it's just wrong. "Technique" is meaningless here, unless you mean the skill involved in using an effect - which is not a good argument for buying anything. Plus, it's got nothing to do with the word play that precedes it.
And - this might just be my personal preference - selling audio plugins with sexual innuendo is just a real turn-off and makes it difficult to take your product seriously.
You make great plugins, but your ads... need some work.
Hope you take this as constructive criticism.
DDMF Ads - oh dear.
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- KVRAF
- 3878 posts since 28 Jun, 2009 from Wherever I lay my hat
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- KVRist
- 278 posts since 18 Dec, 2007 from Germany
Well, ads have to be annoying or funny.
Look, two people are already talking about it
And it is certainly a play with words (tongue in cheek-style):
Size doesn't matter.
Prize doesn't matter.
And technique would be the correct choice of word in this context, not?
At least if one doesn't employ technology to improve one's skills...
oh wait, that is what plugins are for?
Confused
I wonder if DDMF will come up with more similar built slogans with different contexts.
That would be entertaining. (Oh my, am I easily amused
)
Greetings
D.
Look, two people are already talking about it
And it is certainly a play with words (tongue in cheek-style):
Size doesn't matter.
Prize doesn't matter.
And technique would be the correct choice of word in this context, not?
At least if one doesn't employ technology to improve one's skills...
oh wait, that is what plugins are for?
Confused
I wonder if DDMF will come up with more similar built slogans with different contexts.
That would be entertaining. (Oh my, am I easily amused
)Greetings
D.
"There's a certain detail seen here."
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- KVRAF
- 19886 posts since 16 Sep, 2001 from Las Vegas,USA
It's Pun not Pune.......ariston wrote:You can't make this particular "pune, or play on words" in English, though, it's just wrong.
None are so hopelessly enslaved as those who falsely believe they are free. Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 3878 posts since 28 Jun, 2009 from Wherever I lay my hat
It's a Discworld quote... hence the quotation marks.Teksonik wrote:It's Pun not Pune.......ariston wrote:You can't make this particular "pune, or play on words" in English, though, it's just wrong.
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- KVRAF
- 19886 posts since 16 Sep, 2001 from Las Vegas,USA
Oh sorry.....I don't read Comic Books......now I see why........ariston wrote:It's a Discworld quote... hence the quotation marks.Teksonik wrote:It's Pun not Pune.......ariston wrote:You can't make this particular "pune, or play on words" in English, though, it's just wrong.
None are so hopelessly enslaved as those who falsely believe they are free. Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 3878 posts since 28 Jun, 2009 from Wherever I lay my hat
Comic books?Teksonik wrote:
Oh sorry.....I don't read Comic Books......now I see why........
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- KVRAF
- 8563 posts since 2 Aug, 2005 from Guitar Land, USA
It's not true "internet-ese", should read:
dont loose your money on others, try ours to
-recap; notice the non-capitalization of the first word, misspellings of lose and too, no ending period.
dont loose your money on others, try ours to
-recap; notice the non-capitalization of the first word, misspellings of lose and too, no ending period.
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- KVRAF
- 2930 posts since 29 May, 2009 from New Zealand
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- KVRAF
- 1794 posts since 9 Apr, 2011
I think it should beRunBeerRun wrote:It's not true "internet-ese", should read:
dont loose your money on others, try ours to
-recap; notice the non-capitalization of the first word, misspellings of lose and too, no ending period.
dont loose youre money on others, try hours to
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http://soundcloud.com/nine-of-kings
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- KVRAF
- 13997 posts since 19 Jun, 2008 from Seattle
I'd go with the "tongue in cheek" contextual ploy, as well.Debby747 wrote:Well, ads have to be annoying or funny.
Look, two people are already talking about it
And it is certainly a play with words (tongue in cheek-style):
Size doesn't matter.
Prize doesn't matter.
And technique would be the correct choice of word in this context, not?
At least if one doesn't employ technology to improve one's skills...
oh wait, that is what plugins are for?
Confused
Although "size" does matter to those who know it does, and to those who wish it didn't.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 3878 posts since 28 Jun, 2009 from Wherever I lay my hat
Touché! I oughta get a cut of future profits now.ChiTown24 wrote:Dear Mr. DDMF developer dude,
keep doing what you're doing. this thread got my attention. gonna check out your website now.
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- KVRian
- 813 posts since 9 Jan, 2012
ariston wrote:Touché! I oughta get a cut of future profits now.ChiTown24 wrote:Dear Mr. DDMF developer dude,
keep doing what you're doing. this thread got my attention. gonna check out your website now.
if i buy anything i'll reference your username