Here's a fairly new track by me. I'm going to do an edit of it sometime in the near future and modify couple of parts in the song. Anyway, here's the track:
http://www.krakulandia.info/Music/mmc/k ... Things.mp3
All feedback is welcome.
Beautiful Things (ebm/electro/something)
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- KVRAF
- 1682 posts since 13 Oct, 2003 from Oulu, Finland
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- KVRAF
- 6467 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York
This is the most fully developed song out of the last three you have posted. Of those three, I like it the best. The chorus works well.
If you are looking for constructive criticism, this track could use some more aggression: louder vocals and dynamic drum fills. In general, your material is very sparse. I think adding chord pads would help fill out your sound.
If you are looking for constructive criticism, this track could use some more aggression: louder vocals and dynamic drum fills. In general, your material is very sparse. I think adding chord pads would help fill out your sound.
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- KVRAF
- 1987 posts since 29 Apr, 2010 from NYC
i havent heard your other tracks, but i think this one sounds pretty good myself. i like how its subtle yet still has an edginess to it. i dont mind it sounding a bit sparse...in fact i think if you filled it in you run the risk of loosing the kind of tense lonely feel it has. just my opinion though.
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- KVRAF
- 12167 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1682 posts since 13 Oct, 2003 from Oulu, Finland
BTW, the "radiant shrine" the lyrics talk about is TV 
So this was a politically charged song.
----- LYRICS ------
look at your radiant shrine
it's hard to please
it's molding your whole life
filled with false needs
it tells what you should be
but that's a lie
just think for yourself this time
you need to rise
rise
beautiful things
oh beautiful things
beautiful things
oh beautiful things
you have to understand my friend
all the shit they feed ya
people swallow what you give them
they've come to like the taste
look at your radiant shrine
it's hard to please
it's molding your whole life
filled with false needs
it tells what you should be
but that's a lie
just think for yourself this time
you need to rise
beautiful things
oh beautiful things
beautiful things
oh beautiful things
look at your radiant shrine
it's hard to please
it's molding your whole life
filled with false needs
it tells what you should be
but that's a lie
just think for yourself this time
you need to rise
So this was a politically charged song.----- LYRICS ------
look at your radiant shrine
it's hard to please
it's molding your whole life
filled with false needs
it tells what you should be
but that's a lie
just think for yourself this time
you need to rise
rise
beautiful things
oh beautiful things
beautiful things
oh beautiful things
you have to understand my friend
all the shit they feed ya
people swallow what you give them
they've come to like the taste
look at your radiant shrine
it's hard to please
it's molding your whole life
filled with false needs
it tells what you should be
but that's a lie
just think for yourself this time
you need to rise
beautiful things
oh beautiful things
beautiful things
oh beautiful things
look at your radiant shrine
it's hard to please
it's molding your whole life
filled with false needs
it tells what you should be
but that's a lie
just think for yourself this time
you need to rise
Misspellers of the world, unit!
https://soundcloud.com/aflecht
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