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advaya · Post by **advaya** » Tue Oct 07, 2008 6:29 pm

Reworked the strings and synths after the September contest ended. Hopefully this version sounds a bit tighter.

eternatti

Short, downtempo piece of muzak.

Feedback welcome.

.:illanoise:. · Post by **.:illanoise:.** » Tue Oct 07, 2008 6:37 pm

I like it from the start. Very epic sounding to me. I love the guitar playing and the elements around it. the beat is pretty nice addition, the buildup was very cool. i also like how this track builds up. The synth that is building up has a telstar vibe, love it. this track is very inspirational fo me at least. I enjoyed the 3.20 journey.

Yuroun · Post by **Yuroun** » Tue Oct 07, 2008 6:44 pm

advaya wrote:Reworked the strings and synths after the September contest ended. Hopefully this version sounds a bit tighter.

Yes it does. Good work.

Maybe a tip. Put an other melody line at the last past before the strings section. That will make it more interesting.

advaya · Post by **advaya** » Wed Oct 08, 2008 7:03 am

Thanks for the comments. Glad you liked it.

@yuron: I was thinking of adding another phrase to this, but it seems all my stuff usually ends up as a ~6 minute track. In the end, I opted to keep this one short (short for my usual fair). Anyway, I hope it doesn't get too uninteresting by the end.

Thanks again for the feedback.

core · Post by **core** » Thu Oct 09, 2008 9:37 am

Very nice soothing piece. The guitar sounds great and I really like the way you did the beats.

advaya · Post by **advaya** » Thu Oct 09, 2008 9:56 am

Hey core.

Thanks so much for the feedback. Glad you like it.

Emerald Tablet · Post by **Emerald Tablet** » Thu Oct 09, 2008 10:15 am

very nice

clear and crispy mix

short, downtempo piece