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DaRKWaTeR · Post by **DaRKWaTeR** » Mon Jun 21, 2004 9:11 am

Comments on these tracks would be appreciated.

http://www.mpsrecords.com/mp3%20files/controversy.zip

http://www.mpsrecords.com/mp3%20files/make%20love.zip

http://www.mpsrecords.com/mp3%20files/y ... 20come.zip

mystahr · Post by **mystahr** » Mon Jun 21, 2004 4:19 pm

or what?

and why zip-files anyhow?

btw. Welcome to KvR.....

Controversie - Volume has been turned full here

There's only just a tad to much thump on that kick, it brings a rather distorted oomf that sounds like its coming from a broken bin. Some quite okay sequences, but first that bass line keeps in the same note sequence forever; it needs some serious varying in the melodies. After about 4 mins my ears got tired with it a bit I must seriously confess. Bring in some serious dynamics into the arrangement

Listened to the other ones and I can hear a good funky thing going on....

Keep tweaking

mystahr · Post by **mystahr** » Mon Jun 21, 2004 4:25 pm

btw make love has a rather okay arrangement and was cool to hear evolve. I still think that you need more variation but your ideas are good

DaRKWaTeR · Post by **DaRKWaTeR** » Mon Jun 21, 2004 6:45 pm

sorry the files are zipped. and they're not tagged either. oops

i'll fix that overnight

Listen to these please Constructive criticism or what?