I don't care if you are going to be silent - I'm not going to listen to it.farlukar wrote:"You'll all regret the stony silence I'm going to keep now!"Hovmod wrote:Why is it better to not scream or swear if you're angry?
"You did WHAT!? I'm SO bottling this up inside!"
November Contest: Gossip
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- KVRAF
- 21348 posts since 26 Jul, 2005 from Gone
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- KVRAF
- 1931 posts since 14 Aug, 2006 from Winnipeg
[fingers in ears]
la la la la... I can't hear *any* of you... la la la
[/fingers in ears]
la la la la... I can't hear *any* of you... la la la
[/fingers in ears]
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- KVRist
- 391 posts since 29 Jun, 2006 from USA
Laura.. great song.. well thought out and well executed.
A real piece of work..you've got it, girl!
This was well worth taking Julie's vocal chords out of the formaldehyde for!!

A real piece of work..you've got it, girl!
This was well worth taking Julie's vocal chords out of the formaldehyde for!!
Watch Harley go whack-O!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0DqENTcF97o
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0DqENTcF97o
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- KVRAF
- 3008 posts since 2 May, 2006 from Liquor store
Ok, one small hint.........the type of music that pisses me off has a certain quality to it that pisses me off. That's the only hint you get.Psy-T wrote:give us a hint then shush, how are we supposed to know what music would piss you off? :p
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Voidoid Surrealist Voidoid Surrealist https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=41079
- KVRAF
- 4048 posts since 18 Sep, 2004 from Places far less tedious than this blue trainwreck...
Ah, the only one of your reviews that had to be padded out by at least 50% with references to things that aren't even there. I'm not sure what that implies, but I guess it shows I must have stood out from the others is some way, at least.LauraMichelJarre wrote: Lots of hazardous chemical industrial noises in this one. Yes it makes me sick, and yes I feel it too. The sonata form has many fine proponents, but this has nothing to do with your song. There were a couple of mistakes in the sitar part, but otherwise, you have a future at Guantanemo. The choc ice break during the interval melted time into form.
Nah, not enough shaking coins in a contact mic'ed metal box for me to approach Yamazaki's wonderfully painful noise levels. More influence from Great White Death-era Whitehouse and Deathpile, to be honest. The intent was meant to be less "daily routine", more "breaking point", but I can see what you mean.Zombie Queen wrote:So, sort of Masonna meets Current93 here, I like this sonically, the skit doesn't quite sound like someone pissed, more like natural born sadist on a daily routine.
'Twas a genre piece through-and-though, and that sort of struggle to make out the words is pretty much inherent in power electronics, frequently even more so than what I did. Just count yourself lucky if you couldn't make out the wordsfolderol wrote: I had a real struggle trying to make out the words, which I think resulted in it loosing some of its impact. The sounds were certainly annoying
You f**ker! We had a deal!Gary Ridgway wrote:I think knockman's track is better than Voidoid Surrealist's.
Totally off my Christmas card list now, man.
AWEWSOME!streifentier wrote:As far as Voidoid Surrealist's piece is concerned... What you have written about your piece in the gossip thread has - as I generally despise "lust for violence" crap - pissed me off so much that I am not going to listen to it.
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LauraMichelJarre LauraMichelJarre https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=158959
- KVRist
- 437 posts since 1 Sep, 2007 from Oz
The vocals were first take, except for a second take on the final line because there was a mistake. Then I lifted the monitoring levels to fix a different problem and ended up badly clipping the 3rd and 4th takes.streifentier wrote:Yep, I agree, Laura's song is amazing, hard to make out the many snippets the singing is probably made of. Seems slightly off-topic to me, though.
Off topic? Yes I agree. I said the same thing in an email to one KVR person here before I posted. In musicals there are very few examples of females showing anger in songs. "I Hate Men" from Kiss Me Kate is a great example. "U.N.C.O.U.P.L.E.D." from Starlight Express is another. Both are funny songs as well as being angry.
Death metal or ambient industrial I thought would be easy ways to show anger. They sound loud and angry and aggressive. Satire is usually angry too. It worsens what it sends up even though its funny as well. And I like the anger in "scraping" cellos.
I think a death metal track will probably be the winner here because it fits the theme better. But this was the first idea I came up with and sometimes you do tracks which you don't think fit the theme but you enter them anyway. I'm going away soon so I don't have more time to get the guitar parts correct on a metal track.
Thanks everyone for your comments.
- KVRAF
- 2975 posts since 18 Sep, 2006 from Rosehill Cemetery
You do death metal tracks?LauraMichelJarre wrote:I think a death metal track will probably be the winner here because it fits the theme better. But this was the first idea I came up with and sometimes you do tracks which you don't think fit the theme but you enter them anyway. I'm going away soon so I don't have more time to get the guitar parts correct on a metal track.
"a confession without need of absolution, without need of redemption"
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PurpleCatfishBettie PurpleCatfishBettie https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=211816
- KVRAF
- 3278 posts since 22 Jul, 2009
I thought the lyrics were angry when they were written, but in looking at them now, they're probably not too angry; but they might anger certain listeners at least a tad. They are at least somewhat 'deviate' as requested by Scoops.
I could have screamed these vocals, but have never really done that; and the apartment walls are thin and neighbors can't be bothered.
It was made a bit loud.
Agreed though, the anger part is probably actually more of a preachy resignation.
I'm not sure anyone is going to hit the nail on the head; as to exactly what Scoops was looking for. I'm with Laura that a death metal song will probably win; death metal/industrial.
Some of the entries I've heard so far are actually funny. Others of them are more aligned with 'horror' or 'gore' than actual 'anger.' It will be interesting to see how people vote.
I could have screamed these vocals, but have never really done that; and the apartment walls are thin and neighbors can't be bothered.
It was made a bit loud.
Agreed though, the anger part is probably actually more of a preachy resignation.
I'm not sure anyone is going to hit the nail on the head; as to exactly what Scoops was looking for. I'm with Laura that a death metal song will probably win; death metal/industrial.
Some of the entries I've heard so far are actually funny. Others of them are more aligned with 'horror' or 'gore' than actual 'anger.' It will be interesting to see how people vote.
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- KVRAF
- 3008 posts since 2 May, 2006 from Liquor store
Then i guess no one will win since no one here can do death metal/industrial. Or at least they can't do it right. Looks like the usual crap will win-A ballad for old farts.mrblitz000 wrote: I'm with Laura that a death metal song will probably win; death metal/industrial.
- KVRAF
- 4801 posts since 1 Aug, 2005 from Warszawa, Poland
Personally I rarely find any anger in death metal or industrial, it's horror, gore, deviate, depressive, but not pissed at all. If I had to bet on a genre, I'd rather bet on some more extreme punk (i.e. GG Allin - yes, Green Day - no). As we bet on winners, currently I bet on Laura, so SHUSH is probably quite right in this matter.
- KVRAF
- 2975 posts since 18 Sep, 2006 from Rosehill Cemetery
Really, eh? Hah.S.HUSH wrote:Then i guess no one will win since no one here can do death metal/industrial. Or at least they can't do it right.mrblitz000 wrote: I'm with Laura that a death metal song will probably win; death metal/industrial.
"a confession without need of absolution, without need of redemption"
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Voidoid Surrealist Voidoid Surrealist https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=41079
- KVRAF
- 4048 posts since 18 Sep, 2004 from Places far less tedious than this blue trainwreck...
You're not listening to the right death metal and industrial, then.Zombie Queen wrote:Personally I rarely find any anger in death metal or industrial, it's horror, gore, deviate, depressive, but not pissed at all.


