Ok here is that pesky context thing.osiris wrote: It's a very simple I-V-IV-I progression in E flat major.
that is a kind of progression that doesn't lend itself especially well to a classical kind of approach, so a modulation following it that follows classical kind of principles might be kind of obvious and clunky. ie., your dominant goes to the subdominant, a rock kind of thing where V isn't as interested in being dominant as it would be 'typically'.
Does Louie Louie modulate? Does it have a bridge? I would want to absorb more from models and have some context before writing tricky songs myself.