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But well, another forum I will just dissapear from I guess.
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Hi Mozex and welcome to the KVR music cafe :tu:
I listened to your track and as music is very subjective, some people will like it and some won't. Just life unfortunately...
Although it's not really my bag I thought it sounded pretty good. Now considering it isn't my thing I'm not going to criticize anything. After all your happy with it and it's just for fun right? With that said you should take other peoples opinion with a grain of salt. Unless you are posting tracks to improve them buy using other peoples ears,opinions and dare I say expertise :wink:
Take care,have fun :)
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I know Jehtro and I understand that but why do they need to say things like that I am a child and such on. They just attack my person... Just because I did not agree and explained why I did not agree.
I came to the point that I am gonna give up making tracks. I came to the point that I do not even dare to call it songs anymore or music. Why are they always so hard, have they been treated the same for years and just treat others now like it? I do take critism but I need to be able to do something about it. Like with the distortion, I fixed that immidiatly.
Yes its just for fun... I really do not know what to do anymore.
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Mozex wrote: Sun Jun 30, 2019 11:32 am I really do not know what to do anymore.
Hey look man,I've posted loads of tracks on here since 2011.Some of them I thought were great then to be told it's crap basically.Yeah it's not nice but in the end you can either get upset about it or take on board (or not ) what other people think and feel about it and learn/improve. If you don't like or cant take someone else's opinion and/or advice just ignore it and move on. I can't stand the crap my 17 year old daughter listens to but she probably hates my stuff too, but who cares,I love making noise :wink:
Also it's massively helpful to have another set of ears and it's helped me somewhat over the years.
Just relax and carry on making tunes.
software is a tool that allows us to complete a given task.
social media is full of tools that distract us from a given task.

myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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jethrobull wrote: Sun Jun 30, 2019 11:44 am
Mozex wrote: Sun Jun 30, 2019 11:32 am I really do not know what to do anymore.
Hey look man,I've posted loads of tracks on here since 2011.Some of them I thought were great then to be told it's crap basically.Yeah it's not nice but in the end you can either get upset about it or take on board (or not ) what other people think and feel about it and learn/improve. If you don't like or cant take someone else's opinion and/or advice just ignore it and move on. I can't stand the crap my 17 year old daughter listens to but she probably hates my stuff too, but who cares,I love making noise :wink:
Also it's massively helpful to have another set of ears and it's helped me somewhat over the years.
Just relax and carry on making tunes.
What he said. Sheesh Jethro, some people here drive me nuts.

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Its okay wagtunes, the feeling is simular but I try not to go onto the offense tour.
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I am putting you on ignore. Please stay out of my thread.

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wagtunes wrote: Sun Jun 30, 2019 11:54 am I am putting you on ignore. Please stay out of my thread.
Feeling is simular. No need to get so mad Wagtunes. You did nothing else then offend me the whole time: I am a child, I am stupid, I need to grow some balls ( I think they are pretty big but okay, I guess you are the expert on it) You basicly did nothing else then offend me after I told you you could not sing (which is sadly the truth) So yeah, maybe you understand now how you make others feel when you bash their track. I hope others will see it too, how you treated me after I told you the truth that you can not sing like you so gladly tell everyone else the truth about their track. You just started to insult me like crazy. I hope all others can see that too.
Thats my experience with you people that bash others music. You are always there to give "advice" but when the favor gets returned you act even worse then I acted when you did it with me. Then I am the a hole or in this case: a little stupid child with no balls. I think thats very funny but who am I right? Dont be afraid, I aint gonna visit your topic anymore, I am not such guy that gladly goes around bashing others people music. I just wanted to return the favor you did for me, and be honest about your track.
Really, you need to do something about that singing.
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Mozex wrote: Sun Jun 30, 2019 11:32 am I know Jehtro and I understand that but why do they need to say things like that I am a child and such on. They just attack my person... Just because I did not agree and explained why I did not agree.
I came to the point that I am gonna give up making tracks. I came to the point that I do not even dare to call it songs anymore or music. Why are they always so hard, have they been treated the same for years and just treat others now like it? I do take critism but I need to be able to do something about it. Like with the distortion, I fixed that immidiatly.
Yes its just for fun... I really do not know what to do anymore.
Name calling is off topic here. The exclamation mark can be used to report personal attacks. Wags should know better.

I'd call this dance-pop or some such. Keep in mind that the advice that you're going to get on KVR is going to be all over the place. Some of it, both the good and the bad, isn't really worth spending much energy thinking about. IMO, you're better off talking about specific production issues here and letting your audience sort out whether or not your music is connecting to them.

It's not an overnight journey man, give it time and don't let the KVR drama get to you. IMO, the Music Cafe is probably one of the worst forums on KVR, find your way around other parts and get to know people here, it will get better with time.

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ghettosynth wrote: Sun Jun 30, 2019 12:13 pm
Mozex wrote: Sun Jun 30, 2019 11:32 am I know Jehtro and I understand that but why do they need to say things like that I am a child and such on. They just attack my person... Just because I did not agree and explained why I did not agree.
I came to the point that I am gonna give up making tracks. I came to the point that I do not even dare to call it songs anymore or music. Why are they always so hard, have they been treated the same for years and just treat others now like it? I do take critism but I need to be able to do something about it. Like with the distortion, I fixed that immidiatly.
Yes its just for fun... I really do not know what to do anymore.
Name calling is off topic here. The exclamation mark can be used to report personal attacks. Wags should know better.

I'd call this dance-pop or some such. Keep in mind that the advice that you're going to get on KVR is going to be all over the place. Some of it, both the good and the bad, isn't really worth spending much energy thinking about. IMO, you're better off talking about specific production issues here and letting your audience sort out whether or not your music is connecting to them.

It's not an overnight journey man, give it time and don't let the KVR drama get to you. IMO, the Music Cafe is probably one of the worst forums on KVR, find your way around other parts and get to know people here, it will get better with time.
You're right, I should know better. But this guy just pushed my buttons. He reminds me of me in an earlier life. I didn't start to improve until I stopped acting like an ass and started listening to people.

Anyway, I put him on ignore so there won't be anymore problems between us.

Sorry for letting myself get sucked into this.

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Mozex wrote: Fri Jun 28, 2019 3:48 pm Song I made yesterday with vocal loops. I think its a pop song but I am not sure at all.

https://soundcloud.com/mo7ex/can-you-feel-it
Yeah....I'd call it "Pop". It's kinda a "club mix" ….LOUD. The vocals could be a little more forward in the mix, but that's just my preference. I see you have run afoul of wags (me too) just shine on.

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I think that you have totally missed that commenters are trying to help you be better. That is the implied thing when you post in a forum where artist feedback is given: please help me to be better.

That you then turn around and start telling those who have put time & expertise into offering that help - because they cared (and liked) what you did...

I'll leave you alone. If you're happy then it is between you and your God.

I'm not happy but that is between me and mine.

:-(

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You did a really nice job with that sampling. Pretty nice poppy song for sure. I like the percussion loops. Everything seems to fit together pretty nicely.

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I feel it is very alternative, and I like it 8) Really like the bass that is going, how is this made?

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Guy Produce wrote: Wed Jul 03, 2019 7:07 pm I feel it is very alternative, and I like it 8) Really like the bass that is going, how is this made?
I am glad that some people like it. I made this with a drum and vocal loop that I bought. I tried to make my own drumpatterns but I just do not have the inspiration for it I guess...
The bass and all other sounds you hear I played myself with Ableton live Intro 10 and I believe the sounds come from the Arturia V collection 7. I am renting to own it because I do not have that much money to spend on the moment since I just do volunteering work in a second hand shop which pays me 1€ a hour. I do have a replacement income but thats not a lot either. But I guess thats off topic. I made several songs with the vocal loop pack that I bought but I was a bit afraid to share them. I will share the next song right now maybe some people like it too...
I am currently on a break from music making, gonna think about it what I shall do in the future. I understand that I am not that good at it, I just make samples. This is because for years I played around with Magix Music Maker and its soundpools. It probably messed it all up for me. Now I create my own samples I guess and I understand that makes the song repetitive. Its all I can do on the moment. But I am glad some of you liked the song, thank you for speaking up and giving a bit of positive feedback.
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