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- addled muppet weed
- 111341 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
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- KVRian
- 725 posts since 30 Mar, 2004 from Melbourne, Australia
Superb. Dynamically, sonicly perfect. Nice drifting foggy vocals. First donkey song I've downloaded and it won't be the last.
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- KVRist
- 252 posts since 19 Apr, 2004 from bordering on reality
I'm not too fond on the purcussion with these sounds. if it were up to me i would focuss more on the guitar and would not allow the beats to interrupt with it. I think that with the guitarparts that you've made you can make a very powerful song with some dosis of melancholy / some dispair in it which then can build up to the perucssion they way you've made it sound now and the way you used it in the composition. I think then it would have a stronger impact on me. i do like vocals and i would keep them in there for sure.
despite my "what i would have done..." i do like this song it has a nice forward going feel. some parts are not too original but still very well excuted and a nice way of recombining these elements.
despite my "what i would have done..." i do like this song it has a nice forward going feel. some parts are not too original but still very well excuted and a nice way of recombining these elements.
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- KVRAF
- 3266 posts since 22 Sep, 2003 from under the sun
Donkey T
you are the king when it comes to mix synths, vox and guitaaars...
this is a great track, as always
i just found it to be a bit muddy in the bassend.
you are the king when it comes to mix synths, vox and guitaaars...
this is a great track, as always
i just found it to be a bit muddy in the bassend.
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- KVRAF
- 2344 posts since 8 Jul, 2002 from Limerick, Ireland
I know Im going to get killed for this but f**k it...
Reminds me of Bowies Little Wonder
Well done Donks - really like it!
Dave
Reminds me of Bowies Little Wonder
Well done Donks - really like it!
Dave
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- Boss Lovin' DR
- Topic Starter
- 14312 posts since 15 Mar, 2002 from the grimness of yorkshire
Hehe, I ended up cutting most of the guitar out of it to be honest. Done loads of the old melancholy geetar stuff, so I thought I'd do something a bit different!austere wrote:I'm not too fond on the purcussion with these sounds. if it were up to me i would focuss more on the guitar and would not allow the beats to interrupt with it. I think that with the guitarparts that you've made you can make a very powerful song with some dosis of melancholy / some dispair in it which then can build up to the perucssion they way you've made it sound now and the way you used it in the composition. I think then it would have a stronger impact on me. i do like vocals and i would keep them in there for sure.
despite my "what i would have done..." i do like this song it has a nice forward going feel. some parts are not too original but still very well excuted and a nice way of recombining these elements.
Cheers everyone for the comments/suggestions -Bowie!

