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Amberience · Post by **Amberience** » Thu Feb 24, 2005 4:03 pm

I'm sick of trying. 5 years now I've been trying, and it never gets me anywhere.

feindbild · Post by **feindbild** » Thu Feb 24, 2005 5:29 pm

Acolmiztli wrote:I'm sick of trying. 5 years now I've been trying, and it never gets me anywhere.

keep trying then. not insulting people who bump your thread might be a good start.

now for some constructive criticism on your song, cause that's the point of posting it here, i guess:
found the structure and especially the main melody too repetitive in its simplicity. interweaving some complementary background melodies would make it more interesting. the lead sound is a bit flat and would profit of a bit of modulation or stereo fx to spice it up.

Amberience · Post by **Amberience** » Thu Feb 24, 2005 5:31 pm

feindbild wrote:
Acolmiztli wrote:I'm sick of trying. 5 years now I've been trying, and it never gets me anywhere.

keep trying then. not insulting people who bump your thread might be a good start.

But I hate myself and I hate the world. I can't help it. I just go off into tantrums with myself about how much everything sucks.

feindbild · Post by **feindbild** » Thu Feb 24, 2005 5:38 pm

Acolmiztli wrote:But I hate myself and I hate the world. I can't help it. I just go off into tantrums with myself about how much everything sucks.

oh.

but making music = joy though, at least for myself. makes it all a bit more bearable. the tantrum thingie sounds familiar to me, btw... kicking around and insulting people will make it worse.

btw, i edited my previous post with some comments on your track.

CypherOne · Post by **CypherOne** » Thu Feb 24, 2005 5:56 pm

I quite like this. It is a bit repetitive. Personally I'd like to hear a high pad sound come in from around the 2 min mark and something to build on top of the beats (but I nearly always say that). Not keen on the crackle that runs through it either. Nice little melody/riff with the lead sound tho I liked that.

skOre · Post by **skOre** » Thu Feb 24, 2005 6:32 pm

I just found it was nice bg music. But for a serious track, it lacked a point.

also: crackle + reverb = not the best idea IMHO

While I listen to it again, it does remind me of some afx tracks that he did as inbetweens, just some little melody and a cheapo rythm. So maybe this song just can't stand for itself

Wopelka · Post by **Wopelka** » Thu Feb 24, 2005 6:36 pm

Acolmiztli wrote:His loss.

Y'know what... you may think I have an attitude problem, but at least it is an attitude, most people around here don't even have one - no personality at all.

Lol this is funny

i'd like to give you a prize because you made an argument with WR and i love his way of handling an argument: i gonna download your track and give you feedback with lots of "personality"

Wopelka · Post by **Wopelka** » Thu Feb 24, 2005 6:50 pm

Acolmiztli wrote:I'm sick of trying. 5 years now I've been trying, and it never gets me anywhere.

where do you want to go, anyway?
try to make music for fun.
that's the only thing that matters.
if others like what you do, that'd be a bonus.

a bit repetitive, maybe, but i like the idea.
could be nice to add some lyrics and vox line on the top... don't you think? and some bigger power drums... the track makes us wait for some kind of start that never comes, if you know what i mean.

cool job.

BTW, i think the 2 clicks rule is the main reason you didn't get much feedback before the sexy argument.

Amberience · Post by **Amberience** » Thu Feb 24, 2005 11:09 pm

Can't really help the two clicks rule. I have no webspace of my own and no money to buy any.

I don't know where I want to go, I'm seriously thinking about quitting with music altogether. Gonna be hard considering my course is music based, but oh well.

whyterabbyt · Post by **whyterabbyt** » Thu Feb 24, 2005 11:14 pm

What kind of space do you need?

haydxn · Post by **haydxn** » Fri Feb 25, 2005 12:56 am

y'know what.. up until now i've always read your name as "Alcomitzi" and that's how it's always pronounced in my head...

has it always been acolmiztli?

maybe i'm dyslexic and never realised! this kind of thing has been happening more and more lately, where all of a sudden i realise that i've been reading a particular word wrongly for ages...

Gridlocked · Post by **Gridlocked** » Fri Feb 25, 2005 1:04 am

Although the song does get repeatative, I really enjoy that riff...A few more different sections and some extra riffs and you could be heading down the Orbital route!

Don't give up, if you want a remix done or any creative input from another party let me know.

Amberience · Post by **Amberience** » Fri Feb 25, 2005 2:48 am

whyterabbyt wrote:What kind of space do you need?

We've talked about this before I think, I think you offered some space but I never took you up on it.

I honestly don't know how much I need. It would probably be way too much than you're willing to offer though.

Appreciated though.

Sicklecell666 · Post by **Sicklecell666** » Fri Feb 25, 2005 3:05 am

Talk to Spe3D about a free account or upload your stuff to the Auditorium & hotlink it here or something..

You could get past the exotic prick stigmata if you really wanted to. I personally think you enjoy bieng difficult though..

edit: which is perfectly ok, of course..KvR needs it's curmodgeons.

whyterabbyt · Post by **whyterabbyt** » Fri Feb 25, 2005 9:00 am

Acolmiztli quoth

We've talked about this before I think, I think you offered some space but I never took you up on it.

I honestly don't know how much I need. It would probably be way too much than you're willing to offer though.

Ive actually got 3Gb space and 50Gb/month between two accounts. That'll eventually go up to about 12Gb and 130Gb/month. I honestly might be able to squeeze in a few files.

Plus there's the dedicated muso stuff Spe3D is doing... definitely worth checking his packages out.

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