Omarciano Gagarin - Ya no estas Mas

[Omarciano]

Hello all.

New here, just want to share and get some feedback on my first original track. Entirely made on Ableton Live.
Any comments will be really appreciated.

https://soundcloud.com/omarciano-gagari ... -estas-mas

Regards!

[layzer]

song itself is good, but quite bass heavy

[sjm]

What layzer said. The mix could do with a better frequency spread. It sounds a bit muffled. You've got a lot going on in the lower mids with all the guitars, the vocals, the synths, some of the bass and the drums all occupying the same space. Not so much going on up top. You could probably give the vocals some more air and maybe tidy up the low end on the guitars a bit. Maybe also give the biting synth a little more top end?

Song is good, arrangement is nice, I like the mix of synths and guitars.

[nineofkings]

Buena composicion y voces! But yeah, as other posters said, the mix is very boomy. Cut out some lows and low-mids from the intrumental, add some top end to the guitars and synths.

[Omarciano]

Hi guys!
Thanks for your comments. I'll back soon with a new mixdown using your advise.
Seeyaa!

[layzer]

looking forward to the new mix.
calibrate your monitoring sources well, usually the culprit. here, you probably
are using phones or speakers that overemphasize the highs....
causing you to dial them down

[bedlamite]

Muy bien hecha! If this is your first track you're off to a great start. Can't comment on the mix as I listened to it on crappy headphones near a busy road. But the song itself is quite good. Thanks for sharing.

[Omarciano]

Hey!
Just updated the song mix on Soundcloud. Thanks for your comments!
https://soundcloud.com/omarciano-gagari ... -estas-mas
Regards!