Electronic Track: "Disintegrate"
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 886 posts since 11 May, 2004 from cologne,germany
Hi there!
https://soundcloud.com/abiuslu/disintegrate
Hope you like it, looking forward for feedback!
Greetings from cologne!
https://soundcloud.com/abiuslu/disintegrate
Hope you like it, looking forward for feedback!
Greetings from cologne!
- KVRAF
- 1988 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
Liked the vibe of the 1st minute.
at 0:56 there is a chord change that feels like a key modulation. Interesting to see it go down in pitch.
1:18->1:50 a lot of chord changes in there. Perhaps too many because you were losing me.
3:20> Mixing : lots of things competing for the same frequencies.
Overall thoughts: 1st minute was very good, but what followed made me not want to continue listening.
at 0:56 there is a chord change that feels like a key modulation. Interesting to see it go down in pitch.
1:18->1:50 a lot of chord changes in there. Perhaps too many because you were losing me.
3:20> Mixing : lots of things competing for the same frequencies.
Overall thoughts: 1st minute was very good, but what followed made me not want to continue listening.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 886 posts since 11 May, 2004 from cologne,germany
Bansaw thanks for the feedback....I will consider changing the harmonies in order to keep the listener´s attention and try to get a more balanced mixed.
By the way, listening to your stuff, sounds very professional ("Outer Stellar"). Great work!
By the way, listening to your stuff, sounds very professional ("Outer Stellar"). Great work!
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- KVRist
- 138 posts since 13 Jun, 2015
First minute is amazing, I feel the power, love it. After that, lost the sense. That's how I feel it.
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Marcel Deneuve Marcel Deneuve https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=417376
- KVRer
- 14 posts since 14 Apr, 2018
First minute flows really nice, but then goes weird attempt to modulate and the track actually loses its cohesion.
Im not a "techno" man, but I think there must be some contrasting parts with more difference in "energy".
This is what I think of your mix
Im not a "techno" man, but I think there must be some contrasting parts with more difference in "energy".
This is what I think of your mix
My website MarcelDeneuve.com. There I post my music and write different thoughts. I'd be glad to see You there!
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 886 posts since 11 May, 2004 from cologne,germany
Cool guys, thanks! The sentiments are all similar - first minutes cool, afterwards it sucks....I´ve rushed it too much I think!