Electronic Track: "Disintegrate"

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Hi there!

https://soundcloud.com/abiuslu/disintegrate

Hope you like it, looking forward for feedback!

Greetings from cologne!

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Liked the vibe of the 1st minute.
at 0:56 there is a chord change that feels like a key modulation. Interesting to see it go down in pitch.
1:18->1:50 a lot of chord changes in there. Perhaps too many because you were losing me.
3:20> Mixing : lots of things competing for the same frequencies.
Overall thoughts: 1st minute was very good, but what followed made me not want to continue listening.

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Bansaw thanks for the feedback....I will consider changing the harmonies in order to keep the listener´s attention and try to get a more balanced mixed.

By the way, listening to your stuff, sounds very professional ("Outer Stellar"). Great work!

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First minute is amazing, I feel the power, love it. After that, lost the sense. That's how I feel it.

:tu:

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First minute flows really nice, but then goes weird attempt to modulate and the track actually loses its cohesion.
Im not a "techno" man, but I think there must be some contrasting parts with more difference in "energy".

This is what I think of your mix :)
My website MarcelDeneuve.com. There I post my music and write different thoughts. I'd be glad to see You there!

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Cool guys, thanks! The sentiments are all similar - first minutes cool, afterwards it sucks....I´ve rushed it too much I think!

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