[Techno] Flare

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mindstuff
KVRist
158 posts since 20 Mar, 2019

Post Mon Jan 27, 2020 8:14 am


aaron aardvark
KVRAF
1718 posts since 22 Jan, 2011 from near Los Angeles

Re: [Techno] Flare

Post Mon Jan 27, 2020 7:56 pm

mindstuff,
Thank you for reviewing my song! Now your song: this song evokes various thoughts and impressions for me. At times, I feel like I am in a nightclub with dancing taking place. Other times I feel the song is rather repetitive, and I would like to hear some good vocals with it. Or have it play with something visual taking place: a movie or film or video, or watching people dance, with lights and lasers. The song sounds quite professional to me, very good sound quality. I got more into the groove on the second listen, and it seemed less repetitive. I think it is very well done for the genre. Cheers! :)

mindstuff
KVRist
158 posts since 20 Mar, 2019

Re: [Techno] Flare

Post Mon Jan 27, 2020 8:27 pm

aaron aardvark wrote:
Mon Jan 27, 2020 7:56 pm
mindstuff,
Or have it play with something visual taking place: a movie or film or video, or watching people dance, with lights and lasers.
At some point when I'm happy enough with my music (nowhere near close yet) I was thinking of working on visuals to go with. Would be a fun project. Thanks for the listen (and twice wow!).

onerez
KVRer
1 posts since 28 Jan, 2020

Re: [Techno] Flare

Post Tue Jan 28, 2020 7:38 am

@mindstuff I like this!! sounds very good. I agree a bit with aaron, maybe add some more variation to it? But as I type this and listen maybe not. Good track!!!

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Bansaw
KVRian
969 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Re: [Techno] Flare

Post Tue Jan 28, 2020 3:08 pm

BPM seemed a little slow for me.
Would be nice if you added some vocal chops, would have been great. Its because you don't have a strong lead sound that the vocals are missed more.
Overall, pretty good though. :tu:

dtrq
KVRist
47 posts since 28 Nov, 2014

Re: [Techno] Flare

Post Wed Jan 29, 2020 3:32 am

I'm surprised no one has mentioned overly loud hi-hats. Apart from that, really cool track.

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