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layzer · Post by **layzer** » Thu Aug 27, 2020 6:13 pm

r1381 wrote: ↑Thu Aug 27, 2020 5:59 pm it didn't do anything for me, didn't have any personality.

no sweat, i let my mom listen to it and she was like, "mehhh"
And my cat doesnt seem to have much of a reaction to it either.
And the total heart breaker... my pet rock which is sitting
right on top of one of the monitors wasn't even moved in
the slightest...well not that my eyes could detect.

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Thu Aug 27, 2020 7:53 pm

guitarmiester wrote: ↑Tue Aug 25, 2020 11:58 pm I agree with everyone else, nice sound design and mix for sure. The track is a little repetitive. The drums really help the song progress.

thanks for listening and the tu for the SD and mix.
i personally dont mind a song repeating. as long it
doesnt repeat too much.
repeating things several times aids in hooking a listener.
but it must be done in short spurts...
leaving them humming the repeated part hours later

seismic1 · Post by **seismic1** » Sat Aug 29, 2020 12:15 am

Good to see you back in the saddle after a long break.

I enjoyed hearing some new music with the unmistakable LAYZERSOUND, and the mix was excellent. I liked your choice of samples too. That film has been the inspiration for at least two of my tracks. Wonderful misdirection with the title

Good work

nirm123 · Post by **nirm123** » Sat Aug 29, 2020 6:27 am

on further listens I also found the track repetitive and that it didn't develop to anywhere (while sounding really good as I mentioned before). sound by itself is important, but the emotional impact will be usually quite marginal, if this is all the track has the offer. so I did see here a lot of potential, just need to strengthen the melody and the track development.

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Sat Aug 29, 2020 7:37 am

nirm123 wrote: ↑Sat Aug 29, 2020 6:27 am on further listens I also found the track repetitive and that it didn't develop to anywhere (while sounding really good as I mentioned before). sound by itself is important, but the emotional impact will be usually quite marginal, if this is all the track has the offer. so I did see here a lot of potential, just need to strengthen the melody and the track development.

thank you for taking the time to listen to my track.
i know it is not as complex as say bohiemian rhapsody
but more a short simple ear experience in what i call
and others know to be:
LAYZERSOUND®
Frantz always picks up on my sub standard
composition skills, sometimes i develop
a song to just where i want it to be.
sometimes i dont. usually depends how interested
i remain in it. regardless, i never put anything
up in here that didnt take considerable effort to produce
or is just a bunch of random noise.

nirm123 · Post by **nirm123** » Sat Aug 29, 2020 7:49 am

I only suggested an improvement because I see here a great potential, I would definitely purchase such music (or consume it on spotify).

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Sat Aug 29, 2020 8:15 am

nirm123 wrote: ↑Sat Aug 29, 2020 7:49 am I only suggested an improvement because I see here a great potential, I would definitely purchase such music (or consume it on spotify).

i think most of us here are always improving in one way or another
in their musical journey. glad to hear you would buy or consume this stuff
if improved, so stay tuned!

nirm123 · Post by **nirm123** » Sat Aug 29, 2020 8:31 am

I would buy it right away, not related to any improvements

and will def add it to my spotify playlist

vurt · Post by **vurt** » Sat Aug 29, 2020 8:44 pm

layzer wrote: ↑Sat Aug 29, 2020 7:37 am or is just a bunch of random noise.

thanks for listening.

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Sat Aug 29, 2020 9:11 pm

vurt wrote: ↑Sat Aug 29, 2020 8:44 pm

thanks for the bump

vurt · Post by **vurt** » Sat Aug 29, 2020 9:12 pm

no prob

vurt · Post by **vurt** » Sat Aug 29, 2020 9:13 pm

nice sounds.
john hurt bit was nice

thomekk · Post by **thomekk** » Sat Aug 29, 2020 10:27 pm

Great! Lots of ideas going on here and a fine arrangement and mix for me. I don't care that there are no big harmonic changes, main thing is how it keeps going... and it does.

Plus: I really don't care which tools were involved when listening to music, main thing is: Does it work for me or not

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Wed Sep 02, 2020 6:35 am

enroe wrote: ↑Mon Aug 24, 2020 6:15 am Nice unusual start, sounds a bit like urban-depeche-mode and could also
pass as film music. I find the large space that you create there very
felicitous. The track is almost too short!

hi enroe, thanks for stopping by for a taste.
i always try to immerse the listener in a wide
open 3D sound stage environment with:
LAYZERSOUND®
agreed, its too short. grew bored and left
it as a little fun sized example of Layzersound.
thanks again

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Wed Sep 02, 2020 6:48 am

r1381 wrote: ↑Thu Aug 27, 2020 5:59 pm ok, so i won't bash this, the mix sounds very professional, you obviously know what you are doing in that regard. i would love to be able to mix to this quality. i fully understand i am not a musician like most people on here, so obviously this review means nothing, but you kept it real with me, so i'll give my honest opinion of your track. it didn't do anything for me, didn't have any personality. didn't really go anywhere or keep my attention, it just felt repetitive.
we all have different tastes and ideas of what is appealing to hear.

This track may be lacking somewhere but how can you say it has no personality? What is your definition of a song having personality? Seems to have a lot to me.

Forbidden Planet - retro electro