Grammatical/Lyrical Errors In Songs.
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- KVRAF
- 6596 posts since 21 Jun, 2004 from Secret Underground Hideout
is this thread the "music theory rant" thread's little hired thug?
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- KVRAF
- 2017 posts since 21 Mar, 2002 from Hutchinson, Kansas
That's what the Beatlemaniac in my head wanted to hear, too. But according to the published lyrics I've seen, it's the "flushable" version...Meffy wrote:I always heard that as "In this ever-changing world in which we're living." Never checked sheet music or lyric sheet to see if it was written broken.Scot Solida wrote:"In this ever changing world in which we live in"
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- Skunk Mod
- 21249 posts since 10 Jun, 2004 from Pony Pasture
If so, just put on some classical music and turn on the low-pressure sodium lamps to highlight its zits. Then it will wander off.androidlove wrote:is this thread the "music theory rant" thread's little hired thug?
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- KVRAF
- 2327 posts since 13 Apr, 2004 from Vancouver, Canada
Dylan Thomas' poetry would be great for those dark, self-loathing, alt-rock tracks...androidlove wrote:i looked up dylan thomas. oh, poetry. it doesn't make for good lyrics (not much of an artsy poetry fan here). put "dylan" into google and see what ya get
Though I'd agree... If you wanted to write 'backstreet boys' type of lyrics, Thomas wouldn't be a good template at all!
Do a google search for 'Fern Hill' nothing will make you loath the whole mortality concept more than that!
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- KVRAF
- 6596 posts since 21 Jun, 2004 from Secret Underground Hideout
i'm not a fan of dark, self-loathing, alt-rock tracks. but oh, i love the backstreet boys. they're so hot. i wanna suck their hair
btw, i was in the top %99 of the usa wit my grammar score back in the ole school days. it was sumpin i could do. i find it a hobby for the pompous
btw, i was in the top %99 of the usa wit my grammar score back in the ole school days. it was sumpin i could do. i find it a hobby for the pompous
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- KVRAF
- 6596 posts since 21 Jun, 2004 from Secret Underground Hideout
i looked up fern hill. i'll never get that time back! try this http://www.ramblehouse.com/acespadeschapter.htm
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- KVRAF
- 2327 posts since 13 Apr, 2004 from Vancouver, Canada
I guess our definitions of tallent are somewhat varied...androidlove wrote:i looked up fern hill. i'll never get that time back! try this http://www.ramblehouse.com/acespadeschapter.htm
Are you in any way still harnessing resentment for people not liking your 'trance' tune?
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- KVRAF
- 6596 posts since 21 Jun, 2004 from Secret Underground Hideout
i made a trance tune?
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- KVRAF
- 2139 posts since 15 Jul, 2003 from ex-NJ, PA
Walking on Sunshine -- "...and don't it feel good." To be proper: "...and doesn't it feel good." 
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- KVRAF
- 2139 posts since 15 Jul, 2003 from ex-NJ, PA
Actually...this type of mistake is probably the most prevalent.torhan wrote:Walking on Sunshine -- "...and don't it feel good." To be proper: "...and doesn't it feel good."
He/She/It don't...
when it should be
He/She/It doesn't (or does not)
So much for poetic license, eh
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- KVRAF
- 2327 posts since 13 Apr, 2004 from Vancouver, Canada
Sorry... my bad... I have you confused with someone else I guess...androidlove wrote:i made a trance tune?
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- Skunk Mod
- 21249 posts since 10 Jun, 2004 from Pony Pasture
http://www.writersblockltd.com/torhan wrote:So much for poetic license, eh :hihi:
Get your own genuine Writer's Block -- AND a Poetic License! Collect 'em all -- be the first on your [writer's] block!