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rockstar_not · Post by **rockstar_not** » Wed Sep 13, 2006 3:01 am

This one was inspired by Jens' lyrics in the 'lyrics needing songs' thread that used to be stickied and no longer is unfortunately.

But I'm glad someone pointed me in the right direction to the old thread where I found Jens' lyrics and started hearing this song in my head while reading it.

Finally got a chance to record it tonight.

Me on my Larrivee (capoed at 5th fret), sampletank se piano and me on vocals.

New and improved version (with a little better timing and better piano sound thanks to Splendid soundfont and ariesverb)
rockstar_not/Jens: Tram Final

Original scratch tracks:
rockstar_not/Jens: Tram

-Scott

rockstarfx · Post by **rockstarfx** » Wed Sep 13, 2006 3:48 am

timeless.

freeztar · Post by **freeztar** » Wed Sep 13, 2006 4:23 am

Nice one Scott and Jens, definitly a keeper!
The guitar sounds great and it kind of reminds me of the sound in "Hey You" or something out of a Tim Buckley tune.

Great tune!

(and a yes for the sticky)

rockstar_not · Post by **rockstar_not** » Wed Sep 13, 2006 9:49 am

'freezy' as X3la calls you and rockstarfx,

Thanks for the listen and comments.

-Scott

zeoy · Post by **zeoy** » Wed Sep 13, 2006 10:12 am

Very sweet. Congrats to both of you.
Hmm 2:00 exactly. It could be a nice entry to the monthly contests.
Only a minor comment: the final guitar chord after the word "missing" could be ... errrr ... missing

rockstar_not · Post by **rockstar_not** » Wed Sep 13, 2006 11:28 am

zeoy,

The 2 minutes was just a coincidence. Can't use it for future monthly contests since it wasn't composed for the contest. Interesting idea about the missing last chord.

Also, I gave a listen to your performance with your son. That had to be a blast.

-Scott

zeoy · Post by **zeoy** » Wed Sep 13, 2006 11:39 am

rockstar_not wrote:zeoy,

The 2 minutes was just a coincidence. Can't use it for future monthly contests since it wasn't composed for the contest. Interesting idea about the missing last chord.

yeah, I know about the rules that's why I said "could"

rockstar_not wrote:Also, I gave a listen to your performance with your son. That had to be a blast.

Thanx for listening. Bump it whenever you want

core · Post by **core** » Wed Sep 13, 2006 2:48 pm

Very nice atmosphere in this track, well sung too. It's a keeper

rockstar_not · Post by **rockstar_not** » Thu Sep 14, 2006 2:35 am

core thanks.

Credit again to Jens for the imagery in the lyrics.

-Scott

Scoops · Post by **Scoops** » Thu Sep 14, 2006 2:55 am

This is really nice!!!!!!!!!!!

Scoops

fateamenabletochange · Thu Sep 14, 2006 8:54 am

yes,lost threads need to be stickied,especially for words like this that

as I have said before,there needs to be a thread for lost chord progressions,which would have to be sticky too,as they might just blow away like these words might have

farking choice delicate song,beautiful,bitter sweet,poignant,world weary

rockstar_not · Post by **rockstar_not** » Thu Sep 14, 2006 10:14 am

scoops and fate.....

thanks for the listen and bump.

-Scott

bluedad · Post by **bluedad** » Thu Sep 14, 2006 10:20 am

lovely! beautiful lyric from Jens, too!
I've used quite a few from the lyrics thread, so I voted yes!

fateamenabletochange · Thu Sep 14, 2006 12:02 pm

ahem,wasn't a bump at all,this wasn't off the first page,last few days have been quiet,and my pleasure,really good singing

mellotronaut · Post by **mellotronaut** » Thu Sep 14, 2006 12:21 pm

This is soooo beautiful! I'll put it on the mix-cd for my holidays in France......

Thank you very much for sharing this wonderful song! Voice, lyrics, music:

Mellohappy

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Rockstar_not / Jens: Tram

should the lyrics needing songs thread be stickied again