Water Drops - some piano works..

[Xiritam]

Iam not really a piano player..and it is one of my first piano musics..So please dont be mad at me if i made any mistakes :p
Btw The song was sequenced in Fl Studio and the piano was generated using pianoteq.
Opinions and afterthoughts are greatly appreciated!
Thanks!

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Cheers!

[alvin18]

I dont know also nothing about piano playing but seems like there is some rhythm cacophony and some velocity problems. But seem like everything is in the same key (excuse my english )

[TristezaOrange]

As the movie cliche goes, "you remind me of myself when i was young"!

It's a really, really beautiful thing - but it needs some work to become the gem it can be. Go to the piano roll, quantize a little, work on the rhythm a bit more.

It reminds me so much of Gymnopedies no.1. But it's jazzier. Top stuff, just work it a little more!

[Xiritam]

Thanks for your opinions really glad to hear that
Will try to improve it, since it was finished i always thought that it had a special kind of rhythm but at the end its just a result of my lack of piano knowledge



Cheers!