so i've been told

[piperrox]

that the chords of the piano in this song are wrong. i, myself cannot hear what the problem is. but i've been told by 3 quite creditable ppl.

can anyone help me out with this?

http://www.sendspace.com/file/65czyi

thanks

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[realisation]

that the chords of the piano in this song are wrong. i, myself cannot hear what the problem is. but i've been told by 3 quite creditable ppl.

can anyone help me out with this?

http://www.sendspace.com/file/65czyi

thanks

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the last dada in the bar sound off (in terms of rythym)


hmm. the chords dont follow the melody, that could be what they mean about it sounding wrong.

[piperrox]

it's the fact that i cannot hear the problem that is bothering me more than anything else, and not the actual problem itself.

maybe i'm tonedeaf lol

So the last dada doesn't go with the melody?

Thanks for listening and reading

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[Kim Lajoie]

it's the fact that i cannot hear the problem that is bothering me more than anything else, and not the actual problem itself.

Sounds fine to me!

-Kim.

[realisation]

it's the fact that i cannot hear the problem that is bothering me more than anything else, and not the actual problem itself.

maybe i'm tonedeaf lol

So the last dada doesn't go with the melody?

no, what i mean is the rythym of the piano sounds time-wise out a bit on the last two notes before it repeats near the end, but that could be an intentional off-beat

It doesn't matter what they say, it sounds great - its all subjective anyway whats right and wrong

[piperrox]

oh ok. The sometimes off beat piano chord hit is intentional.

So do you think that the song is in releasable condition now?

You guys have helped me loads. You're hnestly life savers

take care
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[KLS]

I just listened to this and I like it - lots of fun. And I didn't hear anything wrong with the piano part.