KVR Audio

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Wed Sep 23, 2009 3:00 am

here goes...

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Wed Sep 23, 2009 3:08 am

blurp

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Wed Sep 23, 2009 11:58 am

LOOK OUT!!!

wouldn't want anybody gettin crushed under this thing, it's coming down like a piano.

usual suspects.

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Thu Sep 24, 2009 3:56 pm

vocals were off, updated version now.

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Fri Sep 25, 2009 5:53 am

updated...new bassline and vocals altered now with A bit added.

shhhh hush little bunny...nothing's expected.

unless you feel the need.

Jazzyspoon · Post by **Jazzyspoon** » Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:44 am

links not working for me here...

vespers75 · Post by **vespers75** » Fri Sep 25, 2009 3:02 pm

Hmmm, the lyrics don't do much for me. The bass...it sounds a bit stiff and seems to be obviously sampled. Other than that, it sounds alright.

I still think "Wait" is the best track I've heard from you thus far. I still can't say enough good things about that one.

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Sat Sep 26, 2009 12:41 am

vespers75 wrote:Hmmm, the lyrics don't do much for me. The bass...it sounds a bit stiff and seems to be obviously sampled. Other than that, it sounds alright.

I still think "Wait" is the best track I've heard from you thus far. I still can't say enough good things about that one.

The bass was "boobass", been changed.

Glad you enjoyed "wait", maybe you'd like "Love her" ?

Thanks for comment.

polyslax · Post by **polyslax** » Sat Sep 26, 2009 6:38 pm

I'm liking this a lot mr.me. The music is great and I think the vocal works pretty well. Some of the vocal phrasing runs against the groove for me, but I still dig it. Well done!

Jazzyspoon · Post by **Jazzyspoon** » Sat Sep 26, 2009 6:48 pm

This is evolving nicely from what you originally shared with me, brother. It's a well rounded track and even catchy in spots. I feel like strumming the guitar would really lift the energy of this one towards the end, but it's still a good flow as it is.
Love her is pretty haunting.

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Sat Sep 26, 2009 7:16 pm

polyslax wrote:I'm liking this a lot mr.me. The music is great and I think the vocal works pretty well. Some of the vocal phrasing runs against the groove for me, but I still dig it. Well done!

I think that I know what vocal spots you're talking about? If I take the bass out it seems fine with the guitar...but the bass doesn't stop well anywhere else.

make sence?

Thank you.

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Sat Sep 26, 2009 7:21 pm

Jazzyspoon wrote:This is evolving nicely from what you originally shared with me, brother. It's a well rounded track and even catchy in spots. I feel like strumming the guitar would really lift the energy of this one towards the end, but it's still a good flow as it is.
Love her is pretty haunting.

Step by step, I'm inching foward with it.

I really truly appreciate all the help.

Changed "Lead Piano"