KVR Audio

JFM · Post by **JFM** » Fri Oct 30, 2009 7:24 pm

A work in progress - i would welcome any comments or suggestions towards finishing this track

http://merlin.fileave.com/JFM.mp3

regards

jfm

JFM · Post by **JFM** » Sat Oct 31, 2009 1:39 pm

surely someone has a comment?

Rottweiler · Post by **Rottweiler** » Sat Oct 31, 2009 1:48 pm

The feeling is there but you have to concentrate on mixdown.

Synapse2k · Post by **Synapse2k** » Sat Oct 31, 2009 3:17 pm

Since no one else commented, I will. It isn't my style at all and I really notice that there isn't much variety/continuity. I am surprised that noone else commented, because the majority of tracks here get more than one comment.

I would recommend you become active in the forums and get to know everyone here if you want more feedback, because it seems that KvR is sort of a friends commenting on friends site, more than anything else.

I myself haven't contributed many tracks, but when I did I had to specifically request a response after already submitting music, because noone replied at all.

-SynCensored -Taxative hawaii censored.

Reverend Rhythm · Post by **Reverend Rhythm** » Sat Oct 31, 2009 3:26 pm

My comment would be that you have too much stuff going on in the mids, specificaly at the mid point of the song. The song has a great feel, so add some more to it. BTW, the ending might make a nice breakdown.

Unfinished PROGRESSIVE HOUSE Track