The day the birds died

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This is excellent.

:party:

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can't find the track mr me! I found your audio player but no sign of 'the day the birds died'... what am i doing wrong?

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@ sazb30

For you, clicking on the image, does not bring the track up in a new window?

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no, it doesn't work for me. I've this problem before with one of mr.me's tracks...

@ mr.me - can you put it on your player?

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Does this link work for you? http://www.section8sonicarts.net/music/ ... dsdied.mp3

Maybe, "right click-save target as."

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yes, thanks ckatrun411

wow, mr.me that's a really powerful track! Kinda like a mindf*ck acid trip... Weird and wonderful, twisted and dark.

I think the metal percussion is too loud perhaps?

But, wow! well done :clap:

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The beginning had me in rather unusual ambiance that crossed up industrial and more traditional electronica items. I think the dynamics and mix between the elements are a bit sketchy, but I could be off my hinges.

The falling strings were incredible.

So were the analog-hits that had the delay-ping-pong-panning to them. That was quite formidable.

The bassline does sound a little too sequenced even if this is mostly electronic music. I would have liked to have heard an actual bassist, but I realize that not everyone can play bass or knows a bass player.

The vocals are a little too male-breathy for my taste, but they have a great industrial quality to them in the processing. For me to hear the words, some of the other elements were just a tad too loud -- I might suggest a slightly renovated mixdown.

All in all, this was a good show. I enjoyed the synth tones and the unusual places this track went.

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Thanks!

ckatrun411: Glad you enjoyed, you must be a strange one. :wink:

sazb30: I agree on the metal percs...was compensating for no guitar. :oops:

I'll also post the link too next time.

B_man: Great feedback!

I'll work on these issues in round two. :)

...and the breathy vocals are me, I can't escape them. Perhapse you might have a listen to some of the tracks in my player at my site, maybe better vocal jobs? :oops:


Thanks again, very appreciated!

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good arrangement and sounds... ambianse is strong and a little bit scary too

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markkuja wrote:good arrangement and sounds... ambianse is strong and a little bit scary too
Cheers! :)

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