new electronica track "Blue planet" Comments wanted!!!

[Gucky]

Today I finshed a new electronica track called "Blue planet".

Here it is:
new version:
http://www.4shared.com/audio/Gjw125yv/B ... et_60.html

old version:
http://www.4shared.com/audio/Wb4PR0Nc/B ... et_50.html


I would be happy about your comments!!!

[Gucky]

Bump!

[xoxos]

nice mix, the driving arp was quite pleasant (curious about what i'm hearing, seems like there's almost a subtle pitch envelope to it) the thematic brass patch didn't do a lot for me

[Gucky]

Hi Xoxos,
many thanks for listening.
You are right, there was a pitch shifting effect on the arp.
I knew that are is something wrong but I did not realize what is was.
In my new version I corrected that pitch shifting.
I hope that it now sounds correct for you.
Many thanks for your hint.

Here is the new version:
http://www.4shared.com/audio/Gjw125yv/B ... et_60.html


Comments are welcome!

[Gucky]

Bump!

Some other comments?

[folderol]

Well, I didn't have time to listen to this when you first put it up so had to go hunting for it.

This is pleasant enough, but frankly not inspiring (to me). It is more like musical wallpaper.

I've noticed that ever since 'Forgotten World', which was brilliant, you seem to have lost your edge.

Sorry if that sounds harsh.

[abletondummy10]

The melodies are excellent. Some of the synth leads don't work as well as others. The track might sustain more interest if you were to drop out the beats in a few places.

Not so sure about the comment about losing your edge... seems a bit of an OTT comment to make.

[Gucky]

Many thanks for your comments.

I would be happy about some other comments.