I will post "chain"...what will you post?

[mr.me]

I've made an individual track pack of this song (11.7MB mp3 pack). I'll post it for remix in another thread ...four moons from now!

Okay, lets make a "Remix This" (four moons from now!) thread and hopefully some others will post their remix parts aswell.?

You've got four moons to get your tracks organized...lets do this!

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what will come of this?

[seismic1]

Dramatic intro. Good combination of "hard" and "soft" sounds. Especially like the double-bass sound.

Cheers

[mr.me]

Dramatic intro. Good combination of "hard" and "soft" sounds. Especially like the double-bass sound.

Cheers

Acoustic guitar on the harder parts!

Lots of effects, things can get messy quick that way.

I appreciate the feedback, it's never comfortable on a limb.

[mr.me]

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chain
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what could I ever say

make you feel this way

well if i could i would

make you feel this way

what could i ever do

make you feel this way

i'll turn the ocean black

and the sky red

well if i could i would

make you feel this way

what could i ever say

if i could just make it all go away

well if i could i would

just make it all go away

what could i ever say

make you feel this way
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Most likely come up with more later, but for now these are the lyrics.

It's at a critical stage, so now's a good time to kick for the teeth.
...it's ok, i'll thank you for it.

[polyslax]

Full marks right away for doing something that's pretty different. I like a good bold statement.

I think the instrument/sound choices are well done... the acoustic guitar... brilliant idea. Quite catchy in fact, which is hard for something this abstract.

My first instinct was to want to dry up some of the fx... after a few more listens I'm not so sure. I think the mix still rides through the fx pretty well on headphones. I wouldn't mind hearing a more dry mix anyhow... and I know how you like to remix.

[mr.me]

Thank you, very helpful...i am eating this up!

I'm inspired and ready to learn, like a tampon...absorbing.

i think these two sentences are too close together.

[Jazzyspoon]

Wow, this really is my flavor. Nice hybrid and catchy, chopped up vocals. When it gets crunchy and heavy I really dig it and I was kind of hoping it would go back to that at the end in a sort of explosion of sound. Doesn't mean it needs to, that's really a good sign that it will make people want to listen more than once. Nice work. No crits, just enjoyed the track.

[mr.me]

Wow, this really is my flavor. Nice hybrid and catchy, chopped up vocals. When it gets crunchy and heavy I really dig it and I was kind of hoping it would go back to that at the end in a sort of explosion of sound. Doesn't mean it needs to, that's really a good sign that it will make people want to listen more than once. Nice work. No crits, just enjoyed the track.

Thanks for coming and checking it out, so far people have liked
...not just me!

I might be bipolar, ten months of nothingness...two of inspiration and productivity.

giddy up!

[mr.me]

I have no shame, one last bubble before the great below.

[core]

Very nice, love the vocals.

[folderol]

The mystery of the disappearing link
... or was it a John Cage track

[mr.me]

Very nice, love the vocals.

Thank you kind sir.

[mr.me]

The mystery of the disappearing link
... or was it a John Cage track

Not sure why it didn't work, here's another link:
http://www.section8sonicarts.net/music/chain.mp3

Thanks for giving it a shot tho'.

[mr.me]

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what will come of this?

[Jazzyspoon]