Need feedback for a short new acoustic/electro song using Slate VTM and VCC

[Plajia]

hi friends! just finished this quicky for my band's new album. your feedback will be much appreciated. there is lot of Slate Digital VTM and VCC magic happening.

http://soundcloud.com/patrickpleauaudio ... -you-think

happy listening and thanks
sincerely
Patrick
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I'm currently producing, mixing and finishing my band's second album (prog-pop) due fall 2012. Check out songs from our first album at www.plajia.com

[seismic1]

Nice track. I enjoyed the lyrics and the melodies. The song is very well put together. I was a little unsure about the distorted echo effect on the vocals towards the end of the song. I felt there was enough of a build on here for the song to stand up without this, but this is probably just down to my personal taste.

Good work

[Plajia]

hey thanks a lot nice feedback. yes I here you for that. il check this out.went a bit over the top on purpose but ya. might need some balance. glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the feedback

Patrick