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mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Sun Mar 03, 2013 2:58 am

Well, it's like trying climb a mountain of mud...and every morning you're back at the bottom.

But yet I keep climbing.

I guess it's what we do.

Allomerus · Post by **Allomerus** » Sun Mar 03, 2013 4:30 am

Lovely quirky start. I like the wearing thin vocal that sounds thin. The music fits this nicely. The cars etc. are a great touch.
Keep climbing!

ntom · Post by **ntom** » Sun Mar 03, 2013 6:03 am

I like it. And I really like the vocal work too. If that's your voice, you got a good voice.

D.H. Miltz · Post by **D.H. Miltz** » Sun Mar 03, 2013 6:52 am

Nice work. I like the organ.

Shangsean · Post by **Shangsean** » Sun Mar 03, 2013 2:14 pm

I listened to this a few times today. It's quite an original sound you've got going here. It's basically a bunch of whining, but it's enjoyable whining

. It's a cool track.

Frantz · Post by **Frantz** » Sun Mar 03, 2013 4:55 pm

If you're constantly feeling beat up from the feet up, perhaps you need a checkup from the neck up?

This quite a catchy tune. I like it. Perhaps it could use some more lyrics.

Jesse Gorter · Post by **Jesse Gorter** » Sun Mar 03, 2013 6:19 pm

Original :)
I am a little bit distracted by the hard synthesizer. I prefer the organs in it :)

seismic1 · Post by **seismic1** » Sun Mar 03, 2013 11:28 pm

Another mellower workout from mr.me. I liked the track overall, but that synth was a little distracting and intrusive. I thought it obscured some of the other parts, particularly the percussion at the beginning. I really enjoyed the last 50 seconds!

Good work

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Mon Mar 04, 2013 6:42 am

we all fail, we all fall short, we all miss the mark, but we try try again and again! i think the synth would sit better in the song with some heavy stereo chorus to shift it out of front stage, and at half volume also dropped out when the vocals are present. by no means indicating failure, just things to try!

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Tue Mar 05, 2013 5:16 pm

Thank you gents...very good tips as well!

polyslax · Post by **polyslax** » Wed Mar 06, 2013 1:24 pm

Damn that's catchy! The infectious groove contrasts rather starkly with the heartbreaking message of the lyrics. The urban sounds add a really nice detached dimension to the mood of the piece.

macmurphy · Post by **macmurphy** » Wed Mar 06, 2013 2:11 pm

very quirky and very, very good. i love the vocal - it really sounds like you're at the end of your tether! that synth could be softened somewhat but then again i think it's slightly abrasive nature nicely represents an isistant nagging doubt in the back of ones mind. splendid stuff indeed.

neil.

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Tue Mar 12, 2013 8:44 pm

Thanks for having a listen.

It'll be revised at fresher time.

have you ever felt beat up from the feet up?