This 17 year old producer from Rhode Island really has nothing special

[Frantz]

And that Tricky-Loops knows where I live.

Either he is a haX0r with mad skills or he looked at your Bandcamp page which you tagged with Warwick.

but once there's a mic in front of me I worry too much about being on pitch and lose a lot of attitude.

I suggest doing multiple takes. Get the safe take recorded first and then go for attitude later. You can comp the different takes.

[Tricky-Loops]

And that Tricky-Loops knows where I live.

Either he is a haX0r with mad skills or he looked at your Bandcamp page which you tagged with Warwick.

He looked at the Soundcloud page...

And after he read it, he dreamed of Rhode Island because he loves the mellow sound of Rhodes...

[vurt]

yeah, especially if your software enables leaving it rolling and looping adding the ne take automatically, logic does this.
the rearming and pressing record every take wont help relaxing which is where you will find the "attitude"

good stuff,not my thing but you definitely have some talent.

[vurt]

And that Tricky-Loops knows where I live.

Either he is a haX0r with mad skills or he looked at your Bandcamp page which you tagged with Warwick.

He looked at the Soundcloud page...

And after he read it, he dreamed of Rhode Island because he loves the mellow sound of Rhodes...

last night i dreamed of robots doing public service work, giant coins and a penguin being kicked out of a cafe ;shrug:

[folderol]

Good work (says another old fart). I think the issue with bite or conviction in the vocal is probably a combination of "OMG I just hit record so this is IT!" and over-rehearsal, trying to be sure you timing is right etc.

Put the backing on a loop. Have a glass of your favourite tipple. Think about the song and what it means to you, then just sing it.

[robogone]

Pretty cool track. But, Rhode Island? No way, dude. Definitely more of New Hampshire vibe. You should move there.

Wicked good apples...