mixing and arrangement advice needed! (deep-house?)

[waltercruz]

GreenhouseMG

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[GreenhouseMG]

https://soundcloud.com/pattern25/deep-vibe-demo/s-p7YM5

these is a full demo version though, it's without any improvments, i still didn't worked on that since.

[hansba]

@1:20 track sounds like Kraftwerk

it's good i guess

Kraftwerk is always good but that particular sound leads your song to chillout and reminds me alot Kraftwerk (maybe too much). Track starts like Deep House but then there's many kind of mixes of different styles even though deep bass and other instruments continue. I would stay to style of beginning and developes it more. Not bad anyway.


P.S. Also that ocean sound could continues like waves. It stops too early imo. Also Bass phrase could response little bit different not always in same way. But im not specialist if talking about Deep house. Listen beatport.com how different tracks are. Don't make too stereotypical tracks but not too out of genre style too. This was just my humble opinion

[GreenhouseMG]

Track starts like Deep House but then there's many kind of mixes of different styles even though deep bass and other instruments continue. I would stay to style of beginning and developes it more. Not bad anyway.

yep, thanks. i see that currently it's a mix of different genres... maybe it's because i'm not working alone on this track and my companion comes from classic music education and me more on electronic side, but will workout our style someday i hope

[GreenhouseMG]

thank you guys for participation!


P.S. if you are curious, here is the final version of track http://www.kvraudio.com/forum/viewtopic ... highlight=