Occult ballad

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www.youreallfree.com/music/YAF_Twinflamed.mp3

The tale you tell
Expresses it so well
my reflection sits
in the cup of your eyelids
two of them, of me
twinflamed

you speak while I listen
filling in the void
where silence whispers
opposites are
mirrored forever until they discover
love in a glance
more than romance
twinflamed

when there is no you
only a mirror that shows your
heart left of it's place
a great work of art
The tale you tell
Expresses it so well
my reflection sits
in the cup of your eyelids
twinflamed

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Pretty cool. Understated. Kinda sounds a little 60s big-band classic. Hard to explain, but I like the sound. Thanks for sharing.
"The Law speaks too softly to be heard amid the din of arms." -- Gaius Marius {Roman consul,soldier}

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I liked this unusual, mysterious ballad. Only a very strong singer can get away with that kind of minimal backing - a few chords and what could be electric sheep bleating. :)

As far as the lyrics go, I think "twinflamed" is great and "in the cup of your eyelids" is awkward. You can't win them all.

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great (as always)! :)

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Beautiful! And you inspired me to seek out a good translation of Mr. Trismegistus's work.
Who is "I"? What is "I"? This has yet to be explained.

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You never cease to surprise me. Where do you get all of these ideas from? :love:
It wasn't me! (well, actually, it probably was) - apparently no longer an 'elderly', now a 'senior'! Is that promotion?

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beautiful tune - kinda reminds me of a great band from the 1990a called Prefab Sprout
expert only on what it feels like to be me

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Greetings from Russia

please tell me who wrote this text and the musicGreetings from Russia

please tell me who wrote this text and the music

And the one Russian guy says that he wrote this http://pcmusic.ru/blog/flamed

Thank you very much

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Hi

Thanks for asking. Pensive and I.
As the last one and proly the next.

Remco

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Thank you very much
And who is Pensive ? he is the author of music or text? and as I understand singer? Then I called this guy http://pcmusic.ru/blog/flamed His name is Nik Savinich he lives in Kiev
he claims that he sings is his song

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Hi

Thanks for letting me know.
Lyric was a joined effort by pensive and me
I'm the one singing. The people here at KVR know my voice
Unfortunetly this Nik guy does not speak the truth

Kind regards,
Remco

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I can definitely vouch for that fabulous voice! Sounds great and wonderful lyrics.

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Thanks! I try.

Its mildly flattering to see someone post my music claiming its his.
Not sure how to reply on that forum and frankly i cant be arsed
On to the next

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Yeah, I was gonna leap to your defence in my post but decided I would just be adding fuel. Too ridiculous!

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Very nice! You've got a great voice Remco.

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