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Well, I've got 3 songs here but think of them all as the first song I showed you. It's in:

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Tell me what I should do to improve. Don't go easy. These tracks are a bit old already(2003). I make better music now but I don't want to publish my best music while I'm still a 15 year old.

"The Horror" is was supposed to be a parody of the HAPPY trance I hate so much at first but when I realised it was too cool(in my low standards, of course) to be JUST a parody, I decided to make a dark introduction(which, by the way, took me a LOOONG time to make) and change the name from "I love you"(yes, I know, it was supposed to sound stupid) to "The Horror".

"Brainwash" has a terrible intro. I had an idea of what the song should sound like. Repetitive and aggressive. I just couldn't make a good introduction so that's the one criticism I won't take in consideration.

"Hamster" has no VST plugins in it but I would still like to hear feedback on it.

Please :D (a freakishly big smile always gets a reaction)
Last edited by Katanaman on Mon Jun 14, 2004 9:29 am, edited 2 times in total.

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I liked 'Hamster' and 'Brainwash'. Good stuff.
'Brainwash' gave me the fear.
Haven't listened to 'The Horror' yet.
Can't...listen...to..trance.

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brainwash is rippin'....when it was ove i found myself in the fetal position mumbling 'i'm in a happy place i'm in a happy place i'm in a happy place'.....good stuf1!
i'd rather have a mullet than a comb-over.
fortunately, i have neither.

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Mr Lizard wrote:I liked 'Hamster' and 'Brainwash'. Good stuff.
'Brainwash' gave me the fear.
Haven't listened to 'The Horror' yet.
Can't...listen...to..trance.
I can't listen to trance either. It was supposed to sound like trance at first but I can't MAKE trance as well. So the result is another "breakbeat techno"(I guess this is what it's called) track, only a bit more upbeat than hamster and certainly more upbeat than brainwash.
brainwash is rippin'....when it was ove i found myself in the fetal position mumbling 'i'm in a happy place i'm in a happy place i'm in a happy place'.....good stuf1!
Well thank you! I'm glad I managed to make disturbing music. I was actually not sure whether "Brainwash" worked or not but it seems to be...

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uh... no criticism... anyone? I already made you a fancy link and all...

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