What do you think?

[NighT3X]

Hello. I am a starting producer and I need some tips about progressive house music.

Here is my first track:

https://soundcloud.com/night3x/rise-original-mix

I know some things that i have got to improve :
- Do a backround melody playing on the top of main melody
- When I do a build-up, then put the pitch up on the background melody

If you have got some ideas, please give me an advise.

[myoss]

Quite good for first track!
Here is my subjective advice:
-less compression;
-more drums (I've heard only kick and clap);
-more synth sounds -some pads, rhythmic stuff.
-more arrangement tricks.

For arrangement I've tried super-technique - you take your favourite track, put it inside your DAW on audio track. Then you cut the regions by time bars like intro, chorus etc, and then you try to visually disassemble this track by making pseudo-audio tracks like drums start at bar 16, bass at 32. As result you will have visual structure of song.

[tehlord]

There's a section of the forum specifically for production feedback.

[DJ Warmonger]

What do you think?

I think you should make more specific thread names.