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Emerald Tablet · Post by **Emerald Tablet** » Thu Sep 11, 2014 11:00 am

www.youreallfree.com/music/YAF_Balloon.mp3

Fire up the burner we are going for a flight
To the edge of the horizon in a starlit night

Over mountains and valeys and rivers and cities
Destination unknown. Will you fly with me?

Fire up the burner we are going for a trip
The unseen wind is taking our ship

Over mountains and valeys and rivers and cities
Destination unknown. Will you fly with me?

Tonight. Just you and i.
And a million of stars, In your eyes

Fire up the burner we are going away.
Far Far away from the pale grey
High above the earth and its petty worries
Believe me up there its a whole different story

Fire up the burner we are going for a flight
To the edge of the horizon in a starlit night
Taking nothing but our souls and a dream or two
A few happy memories of the lifes we knew

core · Post by **core** » Thu Sep 11, 2014 12:13 pm

Lovely tune Remmie!

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Thu Sep 11, 2014 2:58 pm

good tune, but i would ease up on the brickwall limiting and compression as the fatigue started to kick in after a few seconds listening with the phones. it would sound much more natural with more dynamic range. your vocals are great though!

Frantz · Post by **Frantz** » Fri Sep 12, 2014 1:34 am

I agree with both:

core wrote:Lovely tune Remmie!

+1

layzer wrote:i would ease up on the brickwall limiting and compression as the fatigue started to kick in after a few seconds

+1

Emerald Tablet · Post by **Emerald Tablet** » Fri Sep 12, 2014 1:33 pm

Thanks sooo much guys.
Replaced the old version with a new mix.
Less brickwalling

Also, placed some instruments more in the back
Just to push the voice more upfront without putting it louder than -3 Db

PatchAdamz · Post by **PatchAdamz** » Fri Sep 12, 2014 11:23 pm

I like your vocals and funky vibe of the tune.
Also cool celestial quality for an up-tempo tune.

Cool stuff!

polyslax · Post by **polyslax** » Sat Sep 13, 2014 9:48 am

I love your imagination Remmie, great stuff!

Frantz · Post by **Frantz** » Sat Sep 13, 2014 2:26 pm

I think it's still too brickwalled. Still fatiguing. Good song though.

Tricky-Loops · Post by **Tricky-Loops** » Sat Sep 13, 2014 2:36 pm

Great song, especially I dig the vocals!

But every now and then there's some strange phasing and distorting, a bit less would be better!

Allomerus · Post by **Allomerus** » Sun Sep 14, 2014 10:21 am

Great song Remmie! Love the rhythms and beats.
"Will you fly with me?" Yes! Should be fun...