Hi ! Please write some words about it ..
about melody ? base ? Synth? everything conected with it! and also what i should change..
www.djluck.cxc.pl/t_wave/trance_progressive.mp3
thanx All!
CAN ANYBODY WRITE SOME WORDS ABOUT THIS DEMO ??
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- KVRist
- 34 posts since 2 Jul, 2004
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 34 posts since 2 Jul, 2004
write some opinions.. ill be thankful! !
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 34 posts since 2 Jul, 2004
OK ! ! im waiti' for YOU! 
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- KVRAF
- 7936 posts since 18 Feb, 2003 from out there somewhere
YES, THAT'S DEFINITELY TRANCE, ALTHOUGH PRETTY BASIC EUROPOP REALLY. NOT MY KIND OF THING. THE SYNTHS SEEM A BIT LOUD COMPARED TO THE DRUMS BUT I ALWAYS SAY THAT
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 34 posts since 2 Jul, 2004
but what about the mlody ? it is good ?
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- KVRAF
- 1789 posts since 17 Mar, 2004 from Bretagne, the west of France
Hi,
Nice start
Now start building a lead melody over it starting around 0:30
Nice start
Now start building a lead melody over it starting around 0:30
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 34 posts since 2 Jul, 2004
it is main melody! NOT the begining!
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- KVRAF
- 2830 posts since 2 Mar, 2003 from The only civilized county in Texas
Ok, as people have made clear:
TURN OFF THE FRIGGIN CAPS LOCK!
Anyway.
So basically you have 4 repeats of one motif, then 8 of another. I like the second one because you can't immediately hum it. That also means that 8 repeats is too long.
I'll be interested to see if you can actualy fill 3 or so minutes with this. You have these two motifs. Now what are you going to do with it?
V.
TURN OFF THE FRIGGIN CAPS LOCK!
Anyway.
So basically you have 4 repeats of one motif, then 8 of another. I like the second one because you can't immediately hum it. That also means that 8 repeats is too long.
I'll be interested to see if you can actualy fill 3 or so minutes with this. You have these two motifs. Now what are you going to do with it?
V.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 34 posts since 2 Jul, 2004
what i shoud do ?? master!
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- KVRAF
- 6519 posts since 13 Mar, 2002 from UK
Wrong forum. WRONG CASE. Wrong base.
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- KVRAF
- 1789 posts since 17 Mar, 2004 from Bretagne, the west of France
ok, i accept that it is the main melodyTranceWave wrote:it is main melody! NOT the begining!
But if it is how are you going to create a complete song out of 2 patterns. This is gonna be a hell of a job...
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 34 posts since 2 Jul, 2004
this demo has two patterns .. but ill start making song from the begining.. i know that it is hellof job!
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- KVRAF
- 4176 posts since 2 Feb, 2003 from lost in music
As a beginning it seems to be ok,
needs a bit of an acid line,
and I was hearing a nice Pad-sound coming in for a break (in my head only).
and for me the lead melody synth could be a bit smoother.
needs a bit of an acid line,
and I was hearing a nice Pad-sound coming in for a break (in my head only).
and for me the lead melody synth could be a bit smoother.
sound is vibration, vibration is life
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- addled muppet weed
- 111341 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
id add a monkey at 7 seconds
the flugel horn is too loud
and you need to sweep the snow from the manding strip
its all inferred withn the first two notes,no build upo.needs a bigger muff on the tamfloor and a tweeter tweak for ram efficiency all in all turn the caps off and put it in the music cafe
the flugel horn is too loud
and you need to sweep the snow from the manding strip
its all inferred withn the first two notes,no build upo.needs a bigger muff on the tamfloor and a tweeter tweak for ram efficiency all in all turn the caps off and put it in the music cafe
