my first ever online tune ! ----- Please review

[vishals]

Hello everybody

I am really excited with this. I'm not a professional but i have tried this. I don't understand exactly the word Metal but it's up to decide about my compose.

I been messing with FL Studio for around a year. But it my almost fisrt full compose

Just Listen it plane do not use EQ to boost low frequenciws as it already contains much.

But, listen it loud.


Please review the tune

Electric_Soul at the link below

http://www.geocities.com/vishal_shetye/ ... c_Soul.mp3

I'm also finished with trial web-site.
Please visit

http://www.geocities.com/vishal_shetye/

[VicDiesel]

mp3 file: not found.

home page: empty (yes I have Flash, no I don't do Windows)

V.

[vishals]

Sorry,

Sorry, for song link, i don't know why is it giving error. I am uploading the song to tripod just wait.


But about home page it's working

Try these links

http://www.geocities.com/vishal_shetye/index.html
http://www.geocities.com/vishal_shetye/main.htnl
http://www.geocities.com/vishal_shetye/compose.html

if link still does not work download flash
http://www.geocities.com/vishal_shetye/Media/index.swf

[saulc12]

Although it's not really to my taste, it sounds well produced and has an interesting and original style, pretty good really and certainly meaty.

Your website still does not work from the other links, but there is a message saying that your bandwidth for transfer has been exceeded.

[vishals]

Thanks saulc12

I am uploading the song to tripod also

Sorry for page I can't do much for that.

Actually, page is working fine at my computer,

so could'nt exactly understand the error.

use these

http://www.geocities.com/vishal_shetye/ ... c_Soul.mp3

or

http://www.geocities.com/vishal_shetye/ ... c_Soul.mp3

You can see i uploaded the song twice. Sorry I'm
a dial-up user.

[VicDiesel]

use these

You're over your limit on geocities. What's the URL for that tripod site?

V.

[vishals]

Hi,


This is realy very hard for me
yahoo does not load and
tripod even refused to upload says
can not convert to some fuckin name format

I'm gonna mad

Please help

[Spe3D]

http://audioshot.com

I am setting up a couple of accounts right now, if you have not already asked for one, now would be a good time :O)

Best regards,

Spe3d

:O)

[vishals]

well thanks, Spe3D
but i'm waiting for their reply for free plan.

You have any idea how long does it take.

[Spe3D]

Which user name? I have a ton I am working on right now - I will hunt it out and set it up :O)

Ah! I see you just sent it - ok! you will have it in about 10 mins

Best regards,

Spe3d

:O)

[vishals]

Thanks, Thanks, Thanks



That's all i can say

You are GREAT ------ can't express my feelings

I've macromedia dreamwear doing this job.

You've saved me from going mad. I had started kicking myself. I even had thought of writing virus for yahoo (don't take seriously i'm not that hard core programmer.). So do you run any buisiness. Tell me more about you.

You can better mail me



Thanks, Thanks, Thanks

smiles all over

[koorby]

Well dance is not exactly my taste but your song seems well made, production quality is good and I like the sitar flavour You need to apply EQ on some of the tracks to make it less "muddy" though. The best way to do this is to bring all the faders down on the mixer, then apply one track at a time and see if new tracks introduced get "lost" in the mix. You'd be surprised how just a little trimming of low and mid frequencies can bring a song alive.

Good work.

[mystahr]

Interesting, but way too short

I think Koorby said it right there on how you could approach this to get a better mix. Although it allready sounds quite right.