Panic
I posted a d'n'b track some time ago. People said, that it was more a pop song, so this time it's a little bit harder.
a small d'n'b tune
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- KVRAF
- 2935 posts since 14 Dec, 2003 from Edinburgh
Didn't hear your first one but this one is a good effort
Couple of comments, but I dunno what i'm doing meself really so you should probably ignore them
I'd try and bring the snare forward a bit, and maybe brighten it up a bit, its getting a little bit lost behind the synths(actually the kick too?). Also, the hard-right panned hat started getting a bit samey, dunno what the best thing to do is, maybe less exteme panning, or vary it a bit?
Keep em coming
JIm
Couple of comments, but I dunno what i'm doing meself really so you should probably ignore them
I'd try and bring the snare forward a bit, and maybe brighten it up a bit, its getting a little bit lost behind the synths(actually the kick too?). Also, the hard-right panned hat started getting a bit samey, dunno what the best thing to do is, maybe less exteme panning, or vary it a bit?
Keep em coming
JIm
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- KVRian
- 1418 posts since 10 Jun, 2004 from Inverness, Scotland
I like that. Right up my street so it is. Nice and grim and Goff. Some miserable vocals would be good.
What synth and what drums? I'm fascinated.
What synth and what drums? I'm fascinated.
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"Hell is other People" J.P.Sartre
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"Hell is other People" J.P.Sartre
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- KVRAF
- 7672 posts since 9 Nov, 2003 from Netherlands
Loving the great great lead sounds, distorted and noisy and greatly layered 
For some reason my ears heard this even bigger beast of a sound glitched and all to play a quick string-type melody emerging in the second half of it.
Quite a great track I must say though, although it could use a bit more sparkle and a tad more dirt, but that's how I interpret it.
For some reason my ears heard this even bigger beast of a sound glitched and all to play a quick string-type melody emerging in the second half of it.
Quite a great track I must say though, although it could use a bit more sparkle and a tad more dirt, but that's how I interpret it.
