Assistance With A Song
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- KVRist
- 82 posts since 20 Mar, 2014 from Royal Palace
Hi all,
I'm currently composing a song and I'm at the end of it, but I need some assistance smoothly leading back to the intro (the song is going to loop). The song starts in B minor and and the first chord is Bm and the last chord is currently D major 7. The chord before that is F# major. I just can't figure out how to smoothly lead back to a Bm chord.
I'm currently composing a song and I'm at the end of it, but I need some assistance smoothly leading back to the intro (the song is going to loop). The song starts in B minor and and the first chord is Bm and the last chord is currently D major 7. The chord before that is F# major. I just can't figure out how to smoothly lead back to a Bm chord.
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- KVRAF
- 7872 posts since 21 Dec, 2002 from MD USA
do what I do and just try different stuff till you find something that works. Sometimes you find something interesting that does not follow the rules so much and you end up with something nice.
my music: http://www.alexcooperusa.com
"It's hard to be humble, when you're as great as I am." Muhammad Ali
"It's hard to be humble, when you're as great as I am." Muhammad Ali
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- KVRist
- 370 posts since 13 Jul, 2003 from Berlin
Good tip by ATS.
Also: if you`re in B- then just from music theory an A major chord will lead back nicely to it. But it really all depends on context, harmonic rhythm and melodic direction.
Trial and error sometimes is the best.
For inspiration you might want to read up on cadences http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cadence_(music)
Best, Hans!
Also: if you`re in B- then just from music theory an A major chord will lead back nicely to it. But it really all depends on context, harmonic rhythm and melodic direction.
Trial and error sometimes is the best.
For inspiration you might want to read up on cadences http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cadence_(music)
Best, Hans!
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- KVRian
- 1005 posts since 1 Apr, 2002 from Spain
So you´re having a harmonic dominant, then tonic parallel 7 and want to get back to the tonic.
I think we´d need to hear the melody so far with chords to figure out what´ll be sounding good. The A7 is dominant in D, the parallel key so yes - that should work but totally depends on the context. Equally, if you have room for two chords, you could try with
either Em or E and then F#7
or
Em then either F#7 or F#m
before the Bm.
Best Regards
Roman Empire
I think we´d need to hear the melody so far with chords to figure out what´ll be sounding good. The A7 is dominant in D, the parallel key so yes - that should work but totally depends on the context. Equally, if you have room for two chords, you could try with
either Em or E and then F#7
or
Em then either F#7 or F#m
before the Bm.
Best Regards
Roman Empire
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- KVRist
- 370 posts since 13 Jul, 2003 from Berlin
You wouldn`t really need the A chord to be a dominant seventh chord in order to lead back. Same goes for the F# major.
Dominant 7th to me always sound very "classical"... but then again, we`re getting into taste and also into how cleverly you manage to move the notes.
Best, Hans!
Dominant 7th to me always sound very "classical"... but then again, we`re getting into taste and also into how cleverly you manage to move the notes.
Best, Hans!
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- KVRian
- 1005 posts since 1 Apr, 2002 from Spain
You´re absolutely right Hans. I like to use the dom/7 because it takes extra effort to make it not sound too silly, hence always a good challenge cause if I achieve that, it´s going to give an extra something to the music.
But well, we do not know what the guys song sound like so it may or may not fit in.
Best Regards
Roman Empire
But well, we do not know what the guys song sound like so it may or may not fit in.
Best Regards
Roman Empire
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 82 posts since 20 Mar, 2014 from Royal Palace
Thanks for the responses!
Here's the B section (which will go straight back to the intro which just starts with a plain Bm chord) with the Piano handling the melody and strings taking on the harmony (it's a straight export from the notation program).
In the meantime, I'll try out some of the things already mentioned and play around with it a bit!
Here's the B section (which will go straight back to the intro which just starts with a plain Bm chord) with the Piano handling the melody and strings taking on the harmony (it's a straight export from the notation program).
In the meantime, I'll try out some of the things already mentioned and play around with it a bit!
I have my meals in a royal palace accompanied by the Royal String Quartet.
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- KVRian
- 1005 posts since 1 Apr, 2002 from Spain
Looking forwaard to hear that, will do so later when back from work.
Best Regards
Roman Empire
Best Regards
Roman Empire
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- KVRian
- 1005 posts since 1 Apr, 2002 from Spain
Argh, forgot all about this - will get to it during the weekend!
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 82 posts since 20 Mar, 2014 from Royal Palace
No worries! Alright 
I have my meals in a royal palace accompanied by the Royal String Quartet.
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- KVRian
- 1005 posts since 1 Apr, 2002 from Spain
I just had a listen to this, and I find it hard to hear it as going back towards the beginning at this point at all. It seems to be on its way to something more dramatic and moving than the Scarborough Fair ish theme it starts with. It feels like in the middle of the song, where there´ll be a part different from the rest.
I noticed that there are 12 measures, so you could cut out the last four and just loop after the first 8. The 4 remaining are the ones giving you the feeling that it´s really not gonna loop at all
I hope this was a bit useful...
Best Regards
Roman Empire
I noticed that there are 12 measures, so you could cut out the last four and just loop after the first 8. The 4 remaining are the ones giving you the feeling that it´s really not gonna loop at all
I hope this was a bit useful...
Best Regards
Roman Empire
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- KVRian
- 1005 posts since 1 Apr, 2002 from Spain
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- KVRian
- 1005 posts since 1 Apr, 2002 from Spain
I just had a listen to this, and I find it hard to hear it as going back towards the beginning at this point at all. It seems to be on its way to something more dramatic and moving than the Scarborough Fair ish theme it starts with. It feels like it´s in the middle of a song, where there´ll be a part different from the rest.
I noticed that there are 5 measures, so you could cut out the last one and just loop after the first 4. The 1 remainingis the one giving you the feeling that it´s really not gonna loop at all
Then use the 5th measure later to create that new part which is different from the rest.
I hope this was a bit useful...
Best Regards
Roman Empire
I noticed that there are 5 measures, so you could cut out the last one and just loop after the first 4. The 1 remainingis the one giving you the feeling that it´s really not gonna loop at all
Then use the 5th measure later to create that new part which is different from the rest.
I hope this was a bit useful...
Best Regards
Roman Empire
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 82 posts since 20 Mar, 2014 from Royal Palace
Yeah, I've pretty much came to the same conclusion. I've been thinking about redoing that entire section. I'll try cutting out the last measure and then using it again later before I do that, though.
It was indeed useful. Thank you very much for the assistance! I appreciate it!
Cheers!
It was indeed useful. Thank you very much for the assistance! I appreciate it!
Cheers!
I have my meals in a royal palace accompanied by the Royal String Quartet.