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guitarcomputer · Post by **guitarcomputer** » Fri Jul 23, 2004 4:10 pm

Ok... I think a few of you have been wanting to hear a newer hard song from me... and I think this is going to be the title song of my albulm.. I have two songs and I'm done with it... so hopefully.. it'll be done soon too

Anyways... I think I may end up re-writing the 2nd verse lyrics... cause I'm just not satisfied with them... but anyways.. I'll post the lyrics I have at the moment in a lil while...

Let's see, I used the regular stuff (7 string with my flextone III, bass, and my vocal), ummm... Tubevst, Guitarsuite, some mda effects... and some other stuff...

anyways... the song is called "What is Wrong?"
http://www.fallingdownstudio.com/what_is_wrong.mp3

Enjoy! and as always, all comments welcome

Thanx
-Kyle

Glooper · Post by **Glooper** » Fri Jul 23, 2004 4:14 pm

downloading...

Just to warn you... they've changed the Sig rules... your pictures too big ...

Ben

guitarcomputer · Post by **guitarcomputer** » Fri Jul 23, 2004 4:20 pm

ah.. crap... changing it now...

Glooper · Post by **Glooper** » Fri Jul 23, 2004 4:23 pm

great song though... great production... and those guitars sound amazing!...

What do you use to record your guitars?... Do you di or amp with mic?

Ben

kara · Post by **kara** » Fri Jul 23, 2004 4:28 pm

Hey Kyle,

You won my last review before I leave for 2 weeks

, actually I don't know if that's a gift

So, what's wrong ? Nothing at all, a rock solid rock song.

Just the mix perhaps... in my ears your guitar is really fighting with the vocals (and the guitar wins). You are a good guitarist but give those vox a change to express themself

Just my 2 cents, I'm not a rock specialist

Rony

guitarcomputer · Post by **guitarcomputer** » Fri Jul 23, 2004 4:30 pm

Thanx glooper....

About the guitars... I use a Flextone III amp from line6.. and I just di it into Cubase and eq it a lil in their... other than that, that's about it... Cool thing about the Flextone III it emulates the sound of the amp being mic'd up... which gives it a pretty decent sound... I love it

guitarcomputer · Post by **guitarcomputer** » Fri Jul 23, 2004 4:38 pm

Hey bucodi,

Thanx for the listen and review... I know what you mean.. I change the mix of those vocals to many times... heh.. just eventually decided to let it go.. but yeah.. I think I may mix them up a lil bit in the final mix... also I notice on different stereos the vocals are quite and loud... so.. I dunno.. but I'm pretty sure I may mix it up a lil...

thanx again, and have fun on your trip

-Kyle

Ian B · Post by **Ian B** » Fri Jul 23, 2004 5:12 pm

Hi Kyle,
Another high class offering. Love it

My only complaint is.....................it isn't long enough.

guitarcomputer · Post by **guitarcomputer** » Fri Jul 23, 2004 5:17 pm

hah, not long enough?

I prob could have made it a lil longer... it is 4mins tho.. longer than some of my other songs

thanks for the listen my friend

Ian B · Post by **Ian B** » Fri Jul 23, 2004 5:23 pm

guitarcomputer wrote:hah, not long enough? I prob could have made it a lil longer... it is 4mins tho.. longer than some of my other songs

thanks for the listen my friend

4 minutes isn't long if the songs good enough, and this one surely is

guitarcomputer · Post by **guitarcomputer** » Fri Jul 23, 2004 5:28 pm

hah, thanx Ian

t-willy · Post by **t-willy** » Fri Jul 23, 2004 5:39 pm

been awhile young man

another good one from you. i'm not sure about the mix on this one though. seems a bit muddy and bassy and the guitars are too loud. drums and vocals were a bit difficult to hear in parts over the guitar.

vocals should be the loudest thing in this tune with a voice like that

lates

t-willy

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Fri Jul 23, 2004 5:58 pm

Another nice tune! Good stuff Kyle.

Ixox · Post by **Ixox** » Fri Jul 23, 2004 6:07 pm

Congrats, I love it!
(Except the snare of course

)
I would put the vocal louder but i agree it would be less hard....

Markleford · Post by **Markleford** » Fri Jul 23, 2004 6:20 pm

I can't comment on the mix: listening through tiny (and tinny) laptop speakers!

But the song itself is well-crafted as usual!

Great guitar sound.

And I like the snare.

- m

guitarcomputer - What is wrong? (hard song) :)