guitarcomputer - What is wrong? (hard song) :)

[guitarcomputer]

t-willy
yeah... I always seem to mix my vocals quiter than other people like glad you liked the song tho

mr. me
glad you like and thanx for the listen

Ixox
hah, glad you like it.. and sorry about the snare... don't worry tho, I just ordered bfd, hopefully you'll like a snare from that better

Markleford
heh, sorry you don't have some bigger speakers, glad you like it tho, and the snare

thanks again

[mystahr]

Absolutely nothing wrong with this at all

Great song structure and a vocal that has the tendency to keep running in my head long after the tune has ended (but do give it a more balanced place in the mix)

[guitarcomputer]

Mystahr
Very much thanks and yes... gonna turn the vocal up for the final mix



and....
Here's the lyrics for anyone that's interested...


Verse1
I tried to forget, The things I regret
I tried to join them, I tried to live life
And The days I lived it, were the nights I screamed it
And The times I messed up, were the times I lashed out

Chorus
What is, What is wrong, with the picture I painted
What is, What is wrong, with the picture I painted

The time I lied, The time I cried
The something I had to make it
The time I had, That time was sad
The nothing I had to make it

Verse 2
She had her hopes up, She had her hopes high
The day she left home, was the day she messed up
The things she did for, all the things she wanted
She had come home, cause the nothing plagued her

[bluedad]

great composition gc!
can't wait to hear it after you've
adjusted the vocals.