Check it out y'all.
http://s94949173.onlinehome.us/kim/Fable.mp3
My plan was to write songs all semester - one per week, because I wasn't happy with the number of pieces I completed last semester (only about three or four!).
But then, I'm not really liking the sound of my voice!
Forever,
Kim.
[pop guitar ballad] - Fable
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- KVRAF
- 4692 posts since 28 Jan, 2003 from In these very interwebs
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- Fearer of cheese
- 3216 posts since 12 Mar, 2002 from UK
Me likes this a lot, it shouldn't work but it does 
My only complaint's are the vocals are a touch loud and it could do with more variety on the drums. Nice one.
My only complaint's are the vocals are a touch loud and it could do with more variety on the drums. Nice one.RIP Black Tom and Beckett. They weren't just cats, they were MY cats, the best cats ever.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 4692 posts since 28 Jan, 2003 from In these very interwebs
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- KVRian
- 1349 posts since 12 Jan, 2003 from Paris
WOW... The vocals are loud (too loud ???) !!!
Louder in the verses than in the chorus !
Is it really what you want ?
I love your voice !!!
I agree with IanB, you can try to do some variation with the background accompaniment !
The end is funny...
I like it very much ! (And i'd love to hear a version with quiter vocal in the verses)
Louder in the verses than in the chorus !
Is it really what you want ?
I love your voice !!!
I agree with IanB, you can try to do some variation with the background accompaniment !
The end is funny...
I like it very much ! (And i'd love to hear a version with quiter vocal in the verses)
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- Fearer of cheese
- 3216 posts since 12 Mar, 2002 from UK
I just meant the vocals seem more spoken than sung, that's all. Still a great track tho'Jeez wrote:Thanks!
Why shouldn't it work?Ian B wrote:it shouldn't work but it does
Forever,
Kim.
RIP Black Tom and Beckett. They weren't just cats, they were MY cats, the best cats ever.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 4692 posts since 28 Jan, 2003 from In these very interwebs
Yeah, I'm quite happy with the mix. I'd been listening to a bit of solo vocal+acousticguitar stuff, where the vocal is front and clear, and the background is far behind.Ixox wrote:WOW... The vocals are loud (too loud ???) !!!
Louder in the verses than in the chorus !
Is it really what you want ?
It's more about the lyrics and the vocal...In the chorus, the vocals are not so important so they can go back, and the instruments or "groove" are more important...
Thanks!Ixox wrote:I love your voice !!!
I agree with IanB, you can try to do some variation with the background accompaniment !
The end is funny...
I like it very much ! (And i'd love to hear a version with quiter vocal in the verses)
Forever,
Kim.
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- KVRAF
- 7672 posts since 9 Nov, 2003 from Netherlands
The way the chorus is sung is quite good. I can understand that you say in the chorusses the background is more important, but I feel like Ixox and Ian that a pushing the vox in the verses may be helpful in making a bit more balanced tune.
Enjoyed and do go on and sing more
Enjoyed and do go on and sing more